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Post by missyb on Jan 1, 2010 14:58:49 GMT -5
This chapter has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by Logan on Jan 1, 2010 16:04:14 GMT -5
Uh oh! There's gonna be troub-le!
Ian and Ridge showdown. I'm picturing a brawl in the parking lot LOL!
However I hope Ian will get it into his head that he can't be acting like too much of a hot-head with the condition Brooke is in. It will just confuse her more. And I think it may cause her to hate him. Now THAT would be an interesting twist. And Ridge may use that to his advantage.
I like how you brought Bill Jr into the story for Katie. Although I have to wonder if there will be something between her and Ace.
Storm can shut his big mouth about Deacon. No one asked him and no one wants his opinion.
By the way I thought Deacon had been fired from The Lair by his idiot boss. I'm anxious to see Rose interact with Bridget and Deacon and her grandson Little D. I'm glad Deacon found Bridget's pills. She's so annoying with her drama. I can't deal with people who are like that. At least it's out in the open finally.
I do have to take issue with the Stephers is the only reason Amber is married to Rick. I hate to break it to you but RICK LOVES AMBER.
He always has. He LOVES AMBER.
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Post by missyb on Jan 1, 2010 16:43:28 GMT -5
Uh oh! There's gonna be troub-le! Ian and Ridge showdown. I'm picturing a brawl in the parking lot LOL! However I hope Ian will get it into his head that he can't be acting like too much of a hot-head with the condition Brooke is in. It will just confuse her more. And I think it may cause her to hate him. Now THAT would be an interesting twist. And Ridge may use that to his advantage. I like how you brought Bill Jr into the story for Katie. Although I have to wonder if there will be something between her and Ace. Storm can shut his big mouth about Deacon. No one asked him and no one wants his opinion. By the way I thought Deacon had been fired from The Lair by his idiot boss. I'm anxious to see Rose interact with Bridget and Deacon and her grandson Little D. I'm glad Deacon found Bridget's pills. She's so annoying with her drama. I can't deal with people who are like that. At least it's out in the open finally. I do have to take issue with the Stephers is the only reason Amber is married to Rick. I hate to break it to you but RICK LOVES AMBER. He always has. He LOVES AMBER. Well, there is certainly going to be major issues with Ian and Ridge and YES expect a battle on every field between these two. It WILL get physical and we will see different sides to each man as they fight for the love of Brooke. Ian's more aggerissive side will come out and we will see what made him a very scary S.E.A.L, however there could be a downside. Brooke very well may be afraid of this man who calls himself her husband. As for Ridge, he will find himself facing an adversary to the likes that he hasn't seen before. lOL The family will take sides and expect just about everyone to be furious with Katie for brining Ridge into this mess. Storm and Rick will be most furious. Also expect Ian to learn some things about his wife that he didn't know as Katie fights dirty for Brooke and Ridge. Although I don't like what Katie and Bill are doing on the show, I love the chemistry and I wanted to bring that chemistry on the scene. Hmmm, you noticed something between Ace and Katie. (Maybe...LOL...maybe not) Thanks for correcting me about Deacon. See that what happens when you write a story over years. I had forgotten that Deacon got "fired" but right now I'm going to play it as he quit. Expect Deacon to be invovled in the battle for Forrrester as well as Rose to come to her son's aid. Rose will be very interesting as she become entangled with the Forrresters. It was about time that Deacon found out about the baby. The "cat's out of the bag" now and he's totally committied to his family with Bridget. He won't allow anyone to hurt her. As for Storm, he doesn't know anything about Deacon except what he heard so it's only natural for him NOT to like it. Amber is playing both sides and often THAT is the person who gets burned. I know that Rick loves Amber but that doesn't change that she is an opportunist. She is doing what's best for HER. However she is going to have to take a side and make a major decision. What will it be? With Stephanie? Or against Stephanie? She can't have it both ways anymore. Glad that you are still reading the story. I loved it. But with the new baby and work I don't always have the time. I actually made time this week after reading some Bella and Jacob (yes, I'm team Jacob although I don't hate Edward) fanfiction about Twilight this week. So I figured that I should get on the ball and get to writing again. Boy...it felt good. I missed it a lot. Have a great new year and thanks for your comments Logan. I always enjoy your thoughts and feelings.  |
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Post by simmie on Jan 1, 2010 17:42:22 GMT -5
TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAY!! I dont even know what to say about this chapter. After I was done reading, I sat here with just a little bit of anger and disappointment. Not at you Missy, but probably at the way the story is progressing. I am 100% anti-Ridge Forrester and it just irks me to no end to see him here, having a chance at Brooke, and giving Ian this grief. I suppose Ridge is going to fight for "what's his"? I wish Brooke would just remember quickly and save me the agony of reading about Ridge anymore. Maybe Ian will do me a favor and pound him to death (not in front of Brooke, but definitely in front of chatterbox Katie so she'll be frightened enough to know that she must shut her face!!) OK now i know why I was angry after I finished reading. It's Katie! Hahahaha. After I just typed she was a chatterbox, I got pissed all over again. She absolutely pisses me off about this "great love". Great love my eye!!!! Good chapter tho as always Missy |
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Post by Logan on Jan 1, 2010 22:39:19 GMT -5
I'm not into that whole Twilight thing. I'm on NO ONE'S "team".
I don't even know what that whole thing is with Team Edward and Team Jacob. I don't want to know. I do not find vampires romantic and I just don't get it.
I know about getting things mixed up in fan fics. I know I've gotten things tangled up with my stories. I've wanted to write something for One Night In Vegas only to realize it doesn't work because that's the storyline I have for Legacy. LOL
Sometimes I can't keep my own plots straight! LOL
Of course unlike the writers on the show....I figure it out before I go and write it just to suit the purpose of the plot.
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Post by giovanna on Jan 2, 2010 13:41:11 GMT -5
Whoa, interesting! Where do I start?
Hag is a piece of work! Notice how she interrupts her tea with Amber to make tracks with her broom. And she sure as hell worked Amber over about loyalty, didn't she?
And Tawney has balls! I hate Hag and agree with Tawney 100%, but does she really want to screw Hag over? Tawney is a rookie compared to Hag.
I hate Katie! Just where does she get off, pushing BARF?
As for Ridge, I hope Ian kicks his ass six ways to Sunday.
" Do you really trust Stephanie THAT much?” I certainly don’t. You need to do that you can to look out for yourself, your children and your husband.” Tawny saw the uncertainly in her daughter’s eyes. “ I know of a way that you can really have it all. You’ll save the company. Your husband will be more in love with you than ever. AND you can have the respect of your mother-in-law Brooke. A brand new start that she can reflect on IF she gets her memory back. That’s what you want and all you have to do is…”
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Post by janice on Jan 2, 2010 18:51:55 GMT -5
First of all, Missy, I loved this chapter. But let's make sure that Brooke regains her memory and realizes that it is Ian she loves and not the a-hole, blowhard Ridge.
I don't have much sympathy for Katie and her actions. She may tell herself and even believe that she called Ridge for Brooke, but I think she just wants to prove that she is better and knows more than anyone else. Please let her get hers soon.
Finally, Twilight - I just received the first book for Christmas this year and haven't seen either movie. So, as of yet, I'm not on either team and don't know if I will prefer one or the other. I adore vampires - I used to teach a junior high/middle school English elective on Myths and Legends and I always included an extensive section on vampires and werewolves. The "Vampire Encyclopedia" is a great and interesting resource. I think the romance of these so-called "monsters" is that many times they are reluctant monsters. They often did not choose their lot and are frequently very human. That's my lecture for the evening.
Once again, terrific chapter, Missy!
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Post by missyb on Jan 3, 2010 10:53:42 GMT -5
TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAY!! I dont even know what to say about this chapter. After I was done reading, I sat here with just a little bit of anger and disappointment. Not at you Missy, but probably at the way the story is progressing. I am 100% anti-Ridge Forrester and it just irks me to no end to see him here, having a chance at Brooke, and giving Ian this grief. I suppose Ridge is going to fight for "what's his"? I wish Brooke would just remember quickly and save me the agony of reading about Ridge anymore. Maybe Ian will do me a favor and pound him to death (not in front of Brooke, but definitely in front of chatterbox Katie so she'll be frightened enough to know that she must shut her face!!) OK now i know why I was angry after I finished reading. It's Katie! Hahahaha. After I just typed she was a chatterbox, I got pissed all over again. She absolutely pisses me off about this "great love". Great love my eye!!!! Good chapter tho as always Missy LOL..I'll admit that I was always torn between Jacob and Edward especially after Eclipse but seeing Jacob in "New Moon" the movie, I saw the chemistry between he and Bella and must say that motivated me to be on "Team Jacob" instead of Edward...though I love him as well. LOL. But I digress... I know that next few chapters are going to be hard to write. I am a Bridge fan but I LOVE Ian and Brooke in this story and am NOT a fan of Ridge's in this one. Still, expect for there so be some Bridge scenes becauseRidge is going to do everything in his power to get "Brooke back". Ridge will feel that this is fate giving him back the woman he loves. Expect some twist and turns. Yes, I know that Katie is upsetting. The situation was bad enough and now because of her Ridge is there smack in the middle of it. Ridge will cause problems and Katie will muck things up as her hatred and fear of Ian will grow in the next chapter. Katie will do everything in her power to see that Brooke and Ian are kept apart. She will impart imperative information to both sides hoping for an outcome she wants. This will cause major problems with her family who see this as an act of betrayal although Katie doesn't. Deep down she truly believes this what her sister would want. LOL...it's too bad she doesn't know that Brooke wouldn't want to be with Ridge again. As for Ian and Ridge....WOW...they are going to be gunning for each other using both barrells when it comes to Brooke. It's going to get dirty! |
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Post by missyb on Jan 3, 2010 10:55:01 GMT -5
I'm not into that whole Twilight thing. I'm on NO ONE'S "team". I don't even know what that whole thing is with Team Edward and Team Jacob. I don't want to know. I do not find vampires romantic and I just don't get it. I know about getting things mixed up in fan fics. I know I've gotten things tangled up with my stories. I've wanted to write something for One Night In Vegas only to realize it doesn't work because that's the storyline I have for Legacy. LOL Sometimes I can't keep my own plots straight! LOL Of course unlike the writers on the show....I figure it out before I go and write it just to suit the purpose of the plot. Oh...I love parnormal romances especially with Vampires and Werewolves. If someone wants a list of my faves, I can make a list for them. |
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Post by missyb on Jan 17, 2010 16:17:03 GMT -5
TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAY!! I dont even know what to say about this chapter. After I was done reading, I sat here with just a little bit of anger and disappointment. Not at you Missy, but probably at the way the story is progressing. I am 100% anti-Ridge Forrester and it just irks me to no end to see him here, having a chance at Brooke, and giving Ian this grief. I suppose Ridge is going to fight for "what's his"? I wish Brooke would just remember quickly and save me the agony of reading about Ridge anymore. Maybe Ian will do me a favor and pound him to death (not in front of Brooke, but definitely in front of chatterbox Katie so she'll be frightened enough to know that she must shut her face!!) OK now i know why I was angry after I finished reading. It's Katie! Hahahaha. After I just typed she was a chatterbox, I got pissed all over again. She absolutely pisses me off about this "great love". Great love my eye!!!! Good chapter tho as always Missy Don't be too disappointed in the way that the story is going. It is going a certainly be a very bumpy ride in the upcoming chapters. So...I can understand WHY you were so angry. And YES, Ridge is going to do everything in his power to get Brooke back. He isn't going to play fair, iin fact He'sgoing to play very dirty. His love for Brooke has turned into an obsession. He sees Brooke "as his" and isn't goingto want Ian anywhere near her. Look for him to do everything in his power to keep Brooke by his side. As for Katie...she honestly is doing what SHE thinks is right, however she is DO wrong. Brooke wouldn't have wanted Ridge involved. But Katie doesn't see it that way. She knew that greatlove and history with Brooke and Ridge so she sees thia as an opportunity for Brooke to be with the man she has always wanted. The problem with Katie is that she hasn't listened to the rest of herfamily. THEY aren't going to want Ridge anywhere near Brooke. This will be a major divison between Katie and her family. |
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Post by missyb on Jan 26, 2010 12:28:48 GMT -5
Whoa, interesting! Where do I start? Hag is a piece of work! Notice how she interrupts her tea with Amber to make tracks with her broom. And she sure as hell worked Amber over about loyalty, didn't she? And Tawney has balls! I hate Hag and agree with Tawney 100%, but does she really want to screw Hag over? Tawney is a rookie compared to Hag. I hate Katie! Just where does she get off, pushing BARF? As for Ridge, I hope Ian kicks his ass six ways to Sunday. " Do you really trust Stephanie THAT much?” I certainly don’t. You need to do that you can to look out for yourself, your children and your husband.” Tawny saw the uncertainly in her daughter’s eyes. “ I know of a way that you can really have it all. You’ll save the company. Your husband will be more in love with you than ever. AND you can have the respect of your mother-in-law Brooke. A brand new start that she can reflect on IF she gets her memory back. That’s what you want and all you have to do is…” Stephanie is just like the way that she is on the show. She's willing to scheme, manipulate, abuse and bully any and everyone to get what she wants. It doesn't matter who she uses and it certainly doesn't matter whome she manipulates. Amber is no different. She's using Amber to get what she wants. Tawny of course isn't in Stephanie's league...however it takes one to know one. So, she's going to do everything to steer Amber in a direction which will make Amber more powerful and weathly. However, Tawny had better "watch out", Stephanie Forrester has been playing this game for a long long time. Believe it or not, Katie is truly doing that SHE thinks is right. However she's got it all backwards and turned around. Brooke wouldn't want this. She wouldn't want Ridge to be invovled but Katie refuses to listen. She's making the situation so much worse because now Ridge IS invovled. And believe me, HE will take advantage of the situation. Expect things to get physical between Ridge and Ian...there is no good way or comprise out of this. These are two men who are going to fight for the same woman. |
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Post by simmie on Jan 27, 2010 12:59:34 GMT -5
HOw many more chapters do you have left before this story comes to a close? Or better yet, what I really want to know is, how many chapters do you have left b4 Ian kicks Ridge's ass and Brooke remembers everything and kicks his ass to the curb? I wish Brooke would just let the Forresters buy her out one day and just leave LA completely and take her family with her (Rick, Bridget, Deacon, and any grandkids, but leave Amber b/c that little fool never learns) and start over.
One day someone should end a story like that (someone like you Missy lol)
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