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Quote:| WOW - This has been one of my most favorite stories & I am speechless at this chapter. Amazing! I cannot wait for the next. I never really comment - but I enjoy all of the stories - but this one - wow - there are no words. Thank you so much for the amazing read! |
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Thanks so much. This chapter was a heavy one full of lots of drama. It's one I've planned for a long time. I needed a firey Caspian/Brooke moment. It's been a long time since I wrote a love scene for them so I needed this one to be an explosive one during and after the sex. So...I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. A lot happened here and the next chapter will be full of excitement as well. Thanks for your comments! 
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« Reply #16 on Mar 29, 2008, 10:15am » | |
Quote:Stephanie and Pammy, those two old fools are in for it. Do they really think they can just get Forrester back?
Taylor wasn't going to let her kids be tested to see if they were a match for Bridget. If Ridge takes that selfish so-and-so back, I'll scream.
Brooke learned her lesson that Caspian is not the one to play with. She is having a tough time of it. I wonder what her next move will be.
Go Beth! I love Caspain, but Beth is reacting like a mother should. Taylor should be taking notes. I know the family would demand blood if something happens to Caspain, which I know won't, but Beth wouldn't care as long as she avenged her daughter. Caspain is in love with Brooke so he will protect her mother whatever happens.
Bella. What can I say? My girl means BUSINESS. I love her.
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Stephanie and Pam are up to no good. The truth is, Pam is a dangerous woman because she just sitting there pushing in an elegant refined manner. It's clear that she's out for blood, but you have to wonder, is it all for her sister's benifit. These two women aren't going to go down fighting and there will be a HEATED battle for Forrester. (Poor Brooke and Eric, do they really need that right now?)
Taylor loves Ridge. She wants her husband back and is willing to do just about anything to make amends. Right now Ridge is seeing her kindness and love toward him...will he take her back? Will it be that easy? You'll find out soon. The truth is, Ridge does love his wife, this is the point that either a) he's going to forgive her or b) he's going to move on.
Brooke learned a very POWERFUL lesson. Caspian isn't to be played with. She hurt him deeply by "using" him for sex although we all know that isn't what happened. Brooke gave into what she was feeling and insantly regretted it. It's clear she loves Caspian very much. No matter how much her "hates" him, it's clear he affects her heart and her body in a way that no one ever has. As for Caspian, he was furious but he still loves her. But he meant what he said, he's not going to be toyed with. So, he left her. He realizes that the more pushes Brooke, the more he hurts her. He wants to rebuild but it's not that easy. He lied to her. He broke her trust not to mention he does have a dangerous lifestyle. So...he's going to have to deal with what he's done. So he's decided to pull back even if it hurts him to do so.
As for Brooke...emotionially she's a mess. A lot of it has to to with Bridget, another part Caspian and another part that drug that she's on. She can't sleep or think so she's not going to be making the most raditonal decisions.
Beth..LOL...who knew. This is a real mamma Lion. She went out to take care of Caspian because she really thinks that he raped her daughter. BUT will the family be able to understand that? So...you think that Caspian's okay...well you will find out in the next chapter. But you've got to realize one thing...Beth has some major balls. She was willing to take Caspian on knowing what's behind him. As far as Caspian goes....he loves Brooke heart and soul and I can't see him wanting to hurt Brooke's mother in any way. If he had, he would have told about Lark.
But then there is Bella....she means serious business. She's the dangerous one. Will she be able to deal with Brooke's mother hurting her brother? The truth is, if she had been a man, she would have been the one running the family. She's not big on "forgiveness" so....Beth very well may be in some serious shit.
Thanks so much for your comments...I'm so THRILLED you liked the chapter.
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« Reply #17 on Mar 29, 2008, 10:24am » | |
Quote:Please don't let Crystal come upon a drunk Rick.
I loved the way you handled Amber coming back. I'm not a fan of hers, but I loved that she and Rick were just two parents who loved their son above all else.
Rick was a bit harsh with his lady love, but it was understandable. Hopefully, somehow they will find their way back to each other. |
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Sooo you did pick up on the fact that Crystal's in the house and Rick's on his way to getting drunk. For so many reasons this would be a very bad situation if anything happened between them right now. Rick's hurting and Crystal is way to young for him. This is a distaster in the making.
Amber is back...funny thing. I was going to get rid of her. (She has never been a favorite character of mine.) She wasn't suppossed to come back but she just popped up in my head. Amber's maturing and learning. Jude you'll find will love her totally and be a good influnce on her. She's all about her son. She wants a real family for him but that doesn't mean that she wants to get rid of Rick or CJ. She loves and cares about them. Look for her to take Rick to task about Eve. She's going to try her best to get him to realize that loving someone means accepting their mistakes. Look for Amber to be a key to help someone else unexpected as well.
Rick was harsh...but there is a lot of emotion there. He trusted Eve and thought that she could do no wrong, so finding out that she knew about Trudie hurt him. Look for him NOT to be so forgiving to Trudie and make a play that nobody would see coming. This could cause him some major problems! We are going to see a little darker side to Rick because of his actions. As for he and Eve....he isn't about to just up and forgive her.
One thing for certain Eve and Rick's relationship issues are just heating up. They are going to have more of a "story" from this point on.
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| | Re: Against All Odds Chapter 125 " From Bad To Wor
« Reply #18 on Mar 30, 2008, 2:38pm » | |
WOW Missy!!! That's one amazing chapter! I don't even know where to start!
I loved Bella and what she's doing to Donatella! However, I'm not so fond of the name of your torturer! Too close to the name of one of my sons  I hope Donatella will talk, so that Bella will realize that the family is trying to get Caspian back!
I'm glad Ridge didn't have a heart-attack, but I guess he really needed that wake up call. and he also needed to know that It really was his mother who's behind the paternity test mix-up. However, I'm still very intrigued about what it is Dr. Jenkins wants to tell! Something is still not right, and I'm guessing you are going to throw us another big surprise!
I loved the scenes with Bridget and Dean. And we really need to get to know him better as well. He's a damaged soul, but it sems he's a very wise soul too! And he did Bridget a lot of good too!
I had to laugh at Amber and Jude! (Is Jude a soap character on another show?) I don't really care for Amber so much, but little Eric needs his mom!
I felt really sorry for Eve. OK, so she didn't tell Rick the truth straight away, but she DID come clean, all on her own, and nobody pressured her into telling him anything at all! I wonder what Rick would think of her if he knew more about her past? And he was a bit stupid telling her that nothing would change his love for her, when he really knew that a lot of things could!
I'm a bit mad at Trudie, though. She shouldn't have let Eve carry her secret! She should have either not told Eve anything, or tell Eve to let Rick know straight away! Love is more important than money! Even for people who come from very little.
And I was lauging at Pam and Stephers too! I hope Eric will somehow be able to prove that he DID send old Mr. Douglass all the money, and that Stephanie is only out for revenge! And I'm sure a lot of people will be quite unhappy as they read the fashion magazine with that interview! Will Stephanie even feel ashamed that she was letting the answering machine get her calls, for revenge, while her precious Ridge was in the hospital, and Taylor thought he was dying?
Who is that redhead that Rick wanted Deacon to introduce him to? And why does Deacon find this SO amusing??
And I was totally enjoying Brooke and Caspian very hot indeed! And Brooke was really harsh to him! Why won't she let him explain? And why didn't he just tell her that Beth is the one who's been doing most of the lying? In more ways than one, I think Brooke deserves to know the whole truth now! Even if that's a total bomb as well.
The end had me almost falling off my couch with surprise! Very well done, Missy! Thanks a lot for taking the time to entertain us! :x :x :x
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« Reply #19 on Apr 3, 2008, 6:02am » | |
Quote:WOW Missy!!! That's one amazing chapter! I don't even know where to start!
I loved Bella and what she's doing to Donatella! However, I'm not so fond of the name of your torturer! Too close to the name of one of my sons I hope Donatella will talk, so that Bella will realize that the family is trying to get Caspian back!
I'm glad Ridge didn't have a heart-attack, but I guess he really needed that wake up call. and he also needed to know that It really was his mother who's behind the paternity test mix-up. However, I'm still very intrigued about what it is Dr. Jenkins wants to tell! Something is still not right, and I'm guessing you are going to throw us another big surprise!
I loved the scenes with Bridget and Dean. And we really need to get to know him better as well. He's a damaged soul, but it sems he's a very wise soul too! And he did Bridget a lot of good too!
I had to laugh at Amber and Jude! (Is Jude a soap character on another show?) I don't really care for Amber so much, but little Eric needs his mom!
I felt really sorry for Eve. OK, so she didn't tell Rick the truth straight away, but she DID come clean, all on her own, and nobody pressured her into telling him anything at all! I wonder what Rick would think of her if he knew more about her past? And he was a bit stupid telling her that nothing would change his love for her, when he really knew that a lot of things could!
I'm a bit mad at Trudie, though. She shouldn't have let Eve carry her secret! She should have either not told Eve anything, or tell Eve to let Rick know straight away! Love is more important than money! Even for people who come from very little.
And I was lauging at Pam and Stephers too! I hope Eric will somehow be able to prove that he DID send old Mr. Douglass all the money, and that Stephanie is only out for revenge! And I'm sure a lot of people will be quite unhappy as they read the fashion magazine with that interview! Will Stephanie even feel ashamed that she was letting the answering machine get her calls, for revenge, while her precious Ridge was in the hospital, and Taylor thought he was dying?
Who is that redhead that Rick wanted Deacon to introduce him to? And why does Deacon find this SO amusing??
And I was totally enjoying Brooke and Caspian very hot indeed! And Brooke was really harsh to him! Why won't she let him explain? And why didn't he just tell her that Beth is the one who's been doing most of the lying? In more ways than one, I think Brooke deserves to know the whole truth now! Even if that's a total bomb as well.
The end had me almost falling off my couch with surprise! Very well done, Missy! Thanks a lot for taking the time to entertain us! :x :x :x |
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Sorry that it's taken me a while to respond to you Lexxie...State wide testing is going on for my regular job and I've been using my nights and weekends writing math curriculmn...so I've been busy. But thanks so much for your wonderful comments.
Bella is a woman on a misson and you gotta love a woman who is determined. I LOVE writing her character because she's neither black or while, she's..all gray. There is goodness in her yet she's got an "evil" streak that is so good to. I love it when she's bad. Although she's falling head over heels with Pierce it doesn't change who she really is. Bella is a woman who is very protective of her brother. He's been the only real family she's had and she's willing to do anything to see that he's happy. That being said, you have to wonder if her tatic with Donnatella is wise, she is protected and my be brining that "family" drama back into Caspian's life.
Ridge's anxiety attack shows the stress that he's really been under. Finding out about his mother's actions was too much and so it pushed him. Don't expect Ridge to simply forgive mommy. Not in this lifetime. Taylor however was very frightened and we got a glimpse into her life. She wants her husband back. Will Ridge forgive her for her actions or will be continue to press on for a new life because of the decisions she's made. One thing for certain, Ridge does see that she's there for him.
Dr. Jenkins and the hospital have one HELL of a secret that would cause major damage if it ever got out. Additionally, this same secret could impact Bridget's battle. However the hospital doesn't want this secret to be known....what will Dr. Jenkins do?
Bridget and Dean....I really like the friendship that these two are developing. Dean is very mysterious. His past, as you surmised, wasn't the best...he is damaged. But Bridget will bring the light into his world. As for Bridget, Dean gives her the maturity and a different precpestive. He will be able to reach Bridget in a way that no other character will be able to do. Expect this friendship to cause trouble with Bridget's relationship with Scott. Scott won't think to highly of this teen spending so much time with his girlfriend.
Amber and Jude (actually I envision Jude at Cane on Y&R as far as looks) but Jude owns his own record label and produces music. He's a little wild but has a good heart and is toally in love with Amber. He'll be really supportive of her which will helpd Amber develop a more mature side. Watch for her and Rick to be able to deal with the past and move on.
Poor Eve..the girl can't win for trying. Yes, she did to the right thing in telling Rick and he did say that he would always love her. But Rick's got trust issues because of what Amber's did. He doesn't want to play a fool. Rick's got a lot of pride that sometimes gets in the way of things. He's also furious that she'd know something about Bridget and NOT tell him. Don't expect Rick to just "get over it". He's furious and stubborn. Expect him to do something unexpected as he tries to deal with Trudie. This is on doubt impact Eve but Rick isn't thinking clearly right now.
Trudie did the wrong thing and Eve is paying for it. It isn't fair. But that doesn't make Trudie a bad person. Look for her to try to patch things up with Eve and Rick....but she's going to have to work really hard to do that since Rick is really going to blame her for the mess. Oh...and he isn't going to be the only one!
Funny thing...Pam and Stephanie are ALMOST comical. Pam is refined yet we can see she's really vindictive. The thing about Pam is that she wasn't this way until her husband cheated and left her for a younger woman. So in a sense she feels that she's going to get what's owed to her. As for the queen of mean, Stephanie, she wants revenge. There is a war about Forrester brewing and she just landed the first punch. Of course Eric isn't going to take this sitting down, he'll fight back and the children will do. Expect things to get really dirty in this fight. (Something will happen that YOU won't see coming!)
The redhead is just a woman in the bar, no real siginifigance. As for Deacon he finds trouble amusing especially because he sees Rick as this good guy. So, it's funny that Rick acting this way to him. Deacon will try to "help" Rick ease his pains.
Caspian and Brooke took it to another level with their sex scene. It was intense, raw and passionate. It was everything that they BOTH are. BUT the moment it was over, Brooke had major regret. She still loves this man, that's clear. So she was furious with herself because they haven't dealt with their trust issues and she doesn't trust him, yet she slept with him. The confrontation after the sex was heated as well. Brooke crossed a line with Caspian and he let her know it. He's so sorry that he hurt her and would do anything for but he won't be treated any kind of way. So he decided to give her the space that truthfully, they both needed. It was too soon. A part of Caspian knew it, but he didn't listen and they went to a place that they weren't ready for. So...this makes their already strained "relationship" even more strained.
Brooke's not into listening at the moment. But even Caspian knows with everything going on with Bridget, taking her mother and father away from her is the last thing that she needs. Right now....I'm not sure telling her about Lark would help Brooke yet we k now that more Caspian keeps THAT secret, the more chances it has to come out. Brooke would never really trust him again. The entire thing's a huge mess!
The end was a surprise....GOOD! I still want you to have some twists and turns along the way. Thanks so much for your comments. I loved them!
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« Reply #20 on Jul 15, 2008, 3:45am » | |
I remember you said that there won't be another paternity problem but i cannot stop myself from thinking that what is going to happen again.
We saw that Ridge and Brooke slept together and he didn't use any protection. and then after so short time in this chapter,Brooke and caspian make a very tense love together and i think that he don't use protection either.
So, if Brooke will be pregnant this means that we are going through who is daddy ? that thing that i hate so much.
please Melissa don't do this i had enough of this drama on the show and i really hope that i don't have to go through these things here . i love this story so much and i want to see Caspian and Brooke go over their differences and back together at the end.
Thanks so much for your beautiful stories, you are so talented wonderful writer.
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« Reply #21 on Aug 4, 2008, 9:11am » | |
Jul 15, 2008, 3:45am, rando wrote:I remember you said that there won't be another paternity problem but i cannot stop myself from thinking that what is going to happen again.
We saw that Ridge and Brooke slept together and he didn't use any protection. and then after so short time in this chapter,Brooke and caspian make a very tense love together and i think that he don't use protection either.
So, if Brooke will be pregnant this means that we are going through who is daddy ? that thing that i hate so much.
please Melissa don't do this i had enough of this drama on the show and i really hope that i don't have to go through these things here . i love this story so much and i want to see Caspian and Brooke go over their differences and back together at the end.
Thanks so much for your beautiful stories, you are so talented wonderful writer.
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Hey Rando,
Sorry it's take me so long to respond but I've been out of the country for the last two weeks. I had a great trip to Egypt.
There won't be anymore paternity problems dealing with Brooke, at least not the way that you think. Yes, Brooke has slept with Ridge, but doesn't remember it. She certainly slept with Caspian...and no protection was used either time. So pregancy is possible....but I've got something else up my sleeve for these characters. There will be alot of drama in the fall out of this complication.
Thanks so much for your complement and comments. I really enjoy writing and am always happy to hear what people think of my storlines, plots and characters.
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« Reply #22 on Dec 12, 2008, 4:46pm » | |
So, whats going on with this story? Any word on a new chapter?
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« Reply #23 on Jun 19, 2009, 12:31pm » | |
Sweetie, you wrote another great chapter. I had a lot of catching up to do since I last logged in. I can't remember when I stopped watching the show, they ruined every character for me. I didn't even want to read anymore, but now I'm back for more. I had to read the last 4 chapters to be up to date with the story again.
Missy, you torture me. How can all the evil things happen to Brooke, Caspian and their families? Poor Bridget is facing death, but you write her character so strong and powerful - it's fantastic. I like how Dean and her bond, I hope this will continue. And what's the matter with the new test at the hospital? You got me hooked!
And then my favorite couple, Brooke and Caspian. I can almost feel their pain, they are going through rough times and need each other. I so hope for them to reunite - and for Beth being a bad shooter! What a cliffhanger, sweetie!
Stephanie is still the old hag and now she has someone in her boat - sweet Pammy. I don't trust this woman one bit. Is there anything or anyone who can stop those two?
And then there is Eve, my heart goes out to her. She loves Rick with all her heart, but I always feared her past will come to haunt her - and Rick knows so little about her. She doesn't deserve this misery, she's been through a lot.
You brought back Amber, I'm surprised but I like it. I never liked her on the show, but she did love her son so I'm looking forward to see more of her. You wrote her very mature, it suits her!
And what about Donatella? I always thought she were a minor character, but it seems you decided to change that. Don't know if I like it, this woman is up to no good.
I had so much more in mind to talk about, but I need to go to an appointment right away. I hope to read more of you soon, Hun. Great entertainment!!!!!!!!
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