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Post by missyb on Aug 24, 2009 8:26:06 GMT -5
This chapter has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by jillcat on Aug 24, 2009 9:42:51 GMT -5
Excellent chapters, Missy. I just love this story ;D I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Hope can convince Brooke that it's cool for her to date again  |
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Post by Logan on Aug 24, 2009 10:14:41 GMT -5
Taylor is getting off way too easy. Omar is just creepy but Taylor is welcome to him. Although if he has something in store for the Forresters that could be trouble. But if it's just Stephers he wants to go after...by all means...he may go for it.
What are you doing to Bridget!! A one night stand with someone she doesn't love? Bridget wouldn't do that. No one should ever do that!
That's "loosening" up? Yeah that's being loose alright. And not in a good way. Ugh. You can have fun but not do THAT.
What is wrong wtih her! And PLEASE don't EVER mention Bridget with that boring dork Mark. He's not even good looking. Yeech.
Whatever. I hope Deaocn beats the crap out of Shaun. And then Spencer. I also hope that Bridget rips Deacon away from that bitch Felicia (she's still a heartless bitch no matter what you write Missy. Sorry) I want NO by default. No her "last dying wish" like with Caroline. Felicia needs to have it ALL taken away. I'm sorry but I just feel she deserves it.
Maybe Bridget will finally obtain a clue in her empty head. At least it appears she's on the way of obtaining one. Lord knows she hasn't gotten one on the show. By the way you couldn't let her Deacon dream go on a little longer....
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Post by janice on Aug 24, 2009 14:03:21 GMT -5
Wonderful chapters as usual, Missy! I could almost feel sorry for Taylor, but not quite. I've seen firsthand what alcoholism can do to a family, but you tell the the story of Taylor's agony very well.
No, no, no! Don't let Felicia die! You are writing her the way I remember rather than that useless creature Brad Bell has given us lately. I was going to say let Bridget die, but forget that, too. I loved her one night stand and I hope she and Shaun have a few more. It seemed mutually beneficial. I thought her reaction to her ex's engagement was very realistic. Maybe you can follow Bell's lead and have St. Bridget find the cure for what is ailing her sister.
And Hope's section was really on the mark for a girl her age.
This was wonderful, Missy! We all understand how busy you are, but I do hope for more soon.
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Post by foreverbrookie on Aug 24, 2009 22:26:41 GMT -5
OK I actually did feel sorry for Taylor, maybe because you dragged out Prince Omar, for some reason I've always had a soft spot for him. I think Brooke does deserve a boy toy!
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Post by jrtllf01 on Aug 26, 2009 18:45:29 GMT -5
What wonderful storytelling, Missy!
You did an excellent job of conveying Taylor's agony and self-loathing, something the show glossed over. By the time Taylor's trial was over, it was if poor Darla was just an inconvenient little footnote to Taylor's story. Only a sociopath would feel nothing after knowing she killed two people because of her drinking. Taylor's road to redemption should be a long and agonizing one and like a lot of substance abusers, she had to literally lose everything before she finally got it. I can't stand people who drink and then drive!
At least I understand Taylor's twisted logic in wanting to marry Thorne, and how her insecurities and jealousy compelled her to jump behind the wheel that fateful night. Should she really be that surprised though that Allie wants nothing to do with her? She really shouldn't be that surprised that Stephanie has washed her hands of her.
So Bridget decided to let her hair down and get some, huh? I hope Felicia doesn't die. I think she and Deacon are well-suited because of their temperament. Nor do I see Felicia being a fool and allowing Deacon to dupe her into marriage the way Bridget conveniently did.
I'm also co-signing onto Hope's wish for her mom!
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Post by missyb on Sept 17, 2009 19:28:15 GMT -5
Excellent chapters, Missy. I just love this story ;D I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Hope can convince Brooke that it's cool for her to date again Thanks so much! I'm glad that you like the story. Hope is mature for her age, however I don't see her being able to convince her mom to start dating quite yet. |
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Post by missyb on Sept 17, 2009 19:35:30 GMT -5
Taylor is getting off way too easy. Omar is just creepy but Taylor is welcome to him. Although if he has something in store for the Forresters that could be trouble. But if it's just Stephers he wants to go after...by all means...he may go for it. What are you doing to Bridget!! A one night stand with someone she doesn't love? Bridget wouldn't do that. No one should ever do that! That's "loosening" up? Yeah that's being loose alright. And not in a good way. Ugh. You can have fun but not do THAT. What is wrong wtih her! And PLEASE don't EVER mention Bridget with that boring dork Mark. He's not even good looking. Yeech. Whatever. I hope Deaocn beats the crap out of Shaun. And then Spencer. I also hope that Bridget rips Deacon away from that bitch Felicia (she's still a heartless bitch no matter what you write Missy. Sorry) I want NO by default. No her "last dying wish" like with Caroline. Felicia needs to have it ALL taken away. I'm sorry but I just feel she deserves it. Maybe Bridget will finally obtain a clue in her empty head. At least it appears she's on the way of obtaining one. Lord knows she hasn't gotten one on the show. By the way you couldn't let her Deacon dream go on a little longer.... Taylor does seem to always get off for what she does, doesn't she? Right now she's got Omar. He's got a lot of money and connections. He's always wanted her as a wife and now here's his chance. The question is, once she gets out will she go through with the marriage? Does she even love Omar or is she using him to get what she wants? Omar does have something in store for theForresters. He believe they have betrayed and turned on Taylor so look for him to try to get his revenge. It will be Omar vs. Stephanie....LOL Bridget is going through a lot right now. No...Bridget in the PAST wouldn't have a one night stand, but this Bridget is trying something new. She's tried being married and it didn't work she she's walking on the wild side. She enjoyed her time with Shaun...but it's no relationship. Will she take that "walk" again? Maybe...maybe not. But it's clear that Bridget does have feeling for someone. So is it Deacon OR Nick? We will find out soon and see another side to Bridget as she realizes what she wants and goes after it in a way. As for Felicia, we will get more about her life in the upcoming chapters. |
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Post by missyb on Sept 17, 2009 19:42:32 GMT -5
Wonderful chapters as usual, Missy! I could almost feel sorry for Taylor, but not quite. I've seen firsthand what alcoholism can do to a family, but you tell the the story of Taylor's agony very well. No, no, no! Don't let Felicia die! You are writing her the way I remember rather than that useless creature Brad Bell has given us lately. I was going to say let Bridget die, but forget that, too. I loved her one night stand and I hope she and Shaun have a few more. It seemed mutually beneficial. I thought her reaction to her ex's engagement was very realistic. Maybe you can follow Bell's lead and have St. Bridget find the cure for what is ailing her sister. And Hope's section was really on the mark for a girl her age. This was wonderful, Missy! We all understand how busy you are, but I do hope for more soon. Thanks so much for your comments. One COULD almost feel sorry for Taylor because for the first time she is sincere in her apology. Ridge's death didn't just affect his family or her children but her. She will have to live for the rest of her life knowing that she killed Ridge. Taylor did and always will LOVE Ridge. So we see another side to her. A part of Taylor doesn't believe that she should go free, but that's a small part. She wants to make amends with her children, with Brooke's children and brooke. But somehow that hasn't happened. She also want her relationship back with Stephanie. We will see that Taylor is going to try very hard to rebuild relationships once she gets out. BUT...that won't be too easy. At the same time we will see her relationship with Omar. The question is, she is using him? So you realize that the writing is on the wall for Felicia? It does seem that way. You are correct, Felicia's sick but doesn't realize it yet. We will see more about her life, her love for her husband, her children and her family. The question is...will she make it through this??? Bridget is going through a very different stage in her life. She's taking chances and doing things "Bridget" wouldn't really do. The one night stand was out of character but is was something she needed. She's going to take a look at her life and see what she needs to do. Life is short and now Bridget's going to start taking risks. Thanks so much aboout your comment about Hope. I wanted it to sound like a girl her age. Hope loves her family and her mother. She wants her mother to be happy and will be pulling strings to see that it happens. |
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Post by missyb on Sept 17, 2009 19:51:29 GMT -5
What wonderful storytelling, Missy! You did an excellent job of conveying Taylor's agony and self-loathing, something the show glossed over. By the time Taylor's trial was over, it was if poor Darla was just an inconvenient little footnote to Taylor's story. Only a sociopath would feel nothing after knowing she killed two people because of her drinking. Taylor's road to redemption should be a long and agonizing one and like a lot of substance abusers, she had to literally lose everything before she finally got it. I can't stand people who drink and then drive! At least I understand Taylor's twisted logic in wanting to marry Thorne, and how her insecurities and jealousy compelled her to jump behind the wheel that fateful night. Should she really be that surprised though that Allie wants nothing to do with her? She really shouldn't be that surprised that Stephanie has washed her hands of her. So Bridget decided to let her hair down and get some, huh? I hope Felicia doesn't die. I think she and Deacon are well-suited because of their temperament. Nor do I see Felicia being a fool and allowing Deacon to dupe her into marriage the way Bridget conveniently did. I'm also co-signing onto Hope's wish for her mom! Thanks so much for the compliments JR. I am trying to show the regret, shame and pain that she caused herself, her children, Brooke, and the entire family. The sad part is that it could have been avoided had she paid for her crimes (this subject will be devled into in later chapters). Now she's living life without Ridge whom she will always love. Taylor wants a second chance to try to rebuild and make amends and boy she does have a long way to do such a thing. Right now, nobody wants to be near her expect Omar and Thomas. As far a Thorne, we see that marriage was a mistake on so many levels. Taylor isn't going to simply forget what happened once relased, she wants to try to make it up somehow to Allie as well but that WILL be impossible. Bridget DID let her hair down and walked on the wild side. We will be seeing a more real Bridget andnot the "Saint" that everyone thinks she is. In an upcoming chapter we will see how she sees herself and realize that she doesn't wanto be like Taylor playing the "Saint". As for Deacon and Felicia, they are WELL suited for each other. Deacon can be himself, the bad boy with her and she he. Felicia is time enough for Deacon and they will share a lot of passion, you'll find that out in their chapter. But there are problems ahead with Felicia's health. As you surmised, there is something wrong with her. |
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Post by Logan on Sept 18, 2009 17:30:10 GMT -5
Missy you know darn well I'm going to naturally assume Deacon. ;D
Bridget wouldn't dream of Uncle Ick in that way.... ;D
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