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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 10:27:26 GMT -5
This chapter has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by missyb on Aug 19, 2005 14:18:15 GMT -5
Fantastic as usual with the beautiful pictures and upgrades. That is such a nice touch.
Well where to start? Probably at Nick and Brooke. I really enjoy the way he's committed to Brooke. They are working out their problems together. Not to mention how adorble he and Hope are. Bridget is probably the most delightful character. Isn't it sad how Bell ruins things? I loved Bridget when she was little on the show. She was beautiful, cute and loveable. Take that to Bell to ruin that character. But I digress. Brooke, Nick and Hope are becoming a family, something Hope truly needs.
Deacon wants a second chance and though many may feel that he doesn't but honestly he does. Like it or not, he is Hope's father. I like the fact that Brooke has given him a second chance to be a father to their daughter.
Stephanie doesn't have anything better to do than try to stir up trouble. Taking something as innocent as Hope's picture as a meaning that Brooke wants Ridge. PLEEASSSE! I just wish she'd concentrate on her marriage instead of Ridge.
As for Ridge, he is going to have his hands full with Macy. She doesn't plan to give up easily. So he's made his bed, now he's going to have to lie in it. He's going to be a father again. Even if he doesn't like it. Ridge needs to focus on the children he does have. Thomas is feeling neglicted and he probably isn't the only one. He's got to stop focusing on Brooke, who doesn't want him or his children.
So...Nick's father is still alive. I can't wait to see what you are going to do with this character. He seemed to be an abusive sort. How will this affect Nick, Jackie and Massiomo.
I can only guess who is in the building. I can't wait to see if I'm right. LOL
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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 16:19:52 GMT -5
Fantastic as usual with the beautiful pictures and upgrades. That is such a nice touch. Thanks Missy, I just got the idea that it might be fun to add some illustrations. I'm not sure if the readers will like them or find them annoying, but I wanted to try! Yes. Bell does ruin things. But I have always loved how he made Nick and Hope so close and they are just so important to my story. I love their love and I adore little Hope! I like Deacon, I will never deny that. I think it will be interesting to see him become involved in the Bricky family's lives while others are not too happy about it. Brooke has a good heart and so does Nick and they want to believe him and give him another chance. She is refusing to see the truth no matter what. Hope loves her and was so proud of her little picture, but of course Stephanie saw it for something that it wasn't. Ridge is in a mess right now. All he wants is Brooke but he is starting to ignore his children and that is no good. As for Macy, he did that himself, now he has to live with it. Maybe it's time for him to be a man and go to Thorne and admit his mistakes. And he needs to be stronger and smarter with Macy. Frank Payne is alive. And he is angry and he isn't happy with Nick or Jackie or Massimo. What does he plan to do? Who will he show himself to first? And IS he Nick's dad? Hmmmm do you have more than one guess? I am wondering if you are thinking what I am thinking LOL! Thanks for the comments! ;D |
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Post by foreverbrookie on Aug 19, 2005 22:10:22 GMT -5
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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 22:25:44 GMT -5
Dot that was absolutely AWESOME! I really liked the pictures too. Hope's drawing was just adorable where on earth did you get that? Well, I did the drawing myself LOL! I got some highlighters and a black magic marker and did it then I scanned it Hee Hee! I thought so too, but it was the cheesiest one I could find and I figured we could pass off the pepperoni as sausage LOL! Chuck is the bar owner, Corky is Nick's pal. WoW is an online game that a couple of my friends play, so I threw it in as an inside joke for them. And yes, I know all about Whipem Out Wednesday. Opie and Anthony came to NY and they did it here. I still see a lot of bumperstickers. So were you glad that Nick got out of the wheelchair? And that he and Brooke got to make love again LOL! I had this planned for a long time and I didn't want to make it look like I was copying you. But I wanted a bunch of friends together. And I wanted to give Nick a pal, so I tied him in with Sue. Yes, Frank is alive and he isn't happy. Who will he show himself to first?? Hmmmm?? I'd like to say I'll keep Bridget away, but I think it's better for the story if I don't keep her away forever. I'm glad you're okay with Deacon. I think it will be interesting to see how he and Brooke and Nick can get along. I have to say I am curious as to who you think is in the office. |
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Post by foreverbrookie on Aug 19, 2005 22:50:21 GMT -5
Dot that was absolutely AWESOME! I really liked the pictures too. Hope's drawing was just adorable where on earth did you get that? Well, I did the drawing myself LOL! I got some highlighters and a black magic marker and did it then I scanned it Hee Hee! I thought so too, but it was the cheesiest one I could find and I figured we could pass off the pepperoni as sausage LOL! Chuck is the bar owner, Corky is Nick's pal. WoW is an online game that a couple of my friends play, so I threw it in as an inside joke for them. And yes, I know all about Whipem Out Wednesday. Opie and Anthony came to NY and they did it here. I still see a lot of bumperstickers. So were you glad that Nick got out of the wheelchair? And that he and Brooke got to make love again LOL! I had this planned for a long time and I didn't want to make it look like I was copying you. But I wanted a bunch of friends together. And I wanted to give Nick a pal, so I tied him in with Sue. Yes, Frank is alive and he isn't happy. Who will he show himself to first?? Hmmmm?? I'd like to say I'll keep Bridget away, but I think it's better for the story if I don't keep her away forever. I'm glad you're okay with Deacon. I think it will be interesting to see how he and Brooke and Nick can get along. I have to say I am curious as to who you think is in the office. Bear with me because I haven't figured out the multiple quote thing yet.. LOL Dot I loved your drawing! And I did finally remember who Corky was once they got to the dart scene it came back to me. Ha ha Opie and Anthony yep that was them I forgot they went somewhere else.. LOL I think they got in too much trouble here. I don't remember the bumperstickers I just remember the 18 wheelers with the letters written on the back in the dirt on the truck! I didn't take them being at Chucks with the pool and darts like my story because it was totally different and it's sooo Nick to be at home there and it was cool to have the party come together that in a way reminded me of that bar scene with Ridge and his friends in your other story. oh I forgot to add that part of me wants Massimo not to get any sweet loving tonight with Jackie..  Now you got me going with Frank.. because I thought before that he knew Ridge.. Maybe rethinking my who's behind door number two stand! I'm busy trying to picture Frank.. pock marks on his face, like ruddy complexion. I just picture him nasty like disfigured or something, maybe because I am trying to think of how he faked his death.. SIGH I figured you wouldn't want to devestate Brooke by killing Bridget. I just HATE her so much on the show now, I see red everytime I picture her. I love how you write Deacon, he's different in both but I like him in both. I liked him on the show when Bricky was letting him be part of Hope's life I thought it was a cool dynamic. I've been trying to work him into my story but it's not the right spot for him yet. LOL I don't know if it ever will be. Eventually I suppose. I thought who might be in the office was who you said you were thinking of bringing into the story. But I thought I was wrong because I can't see how or why there. |
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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 23:07:09 GMT -5
Jackie promised Brooke and Nick that she wouldn't string either man along, so I don't think she is going to take either of them to bed yet. She is enjoying both of their company right now.
So you see Frank as ugly and pockmarked LOL! I was thinking that he'd have to be handsome. If he's Nick's dad he should be and if he turned Jackie on and she married him, he should be too. I haven't cast him yet, but I have a few ideas that I'm kicking around. And no, Ridge doesn't know him. Yet at least LOL!
I hate Bridget too, but I don't want to devistate Brooke by losing her daughter to an accident or anything. Besides, I might want to make her suffer.
Hmmmmm. I know who you mean about in the office. It COULD be that person, but then again he didn't seem that shocked. But again, it was only his initial reaction.
And hey, you STILL didn't answer me about Nick WALKING! LOL! My big drama and no one cares hee hee!
Aside from the story, Opie and Anthony got in A LOT of trouble here. They got a couple to have sex in St. Patrick's and the couple got arrested and they got fired and then went to Satalite radio now. They had a major bumpersticker campaign here and they are still around. My Mom and I saw a girl WoWing a truck driver once LOL!
As for the quote thing. Just type it yourself where you want it [quote*]blah blah blah[/quote*] take out the *
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Post by foreverbrookie on Aug 19, 2005 23:44:23 GMT -5
Jackie promised Brooke and Nick that she wouldn't string either man along, so I don't think she is going to take either of them to bed yet. She is enjoying both of their company right now. So you see Frank as ugly and pockmarked LOL! I was thinking that he'd have to be handsome. If he's Nick's dad he should be and if he turned Jackie on and she married him, he should be too. I haven't cast him yet, but I have a few ideas that I'm kicking around. And no, Ridge doesn't know him. Yet at least LOL! I hate Bridget too, but I don't want to devistate Brooke by losing her daughter to an accident or anything. Besides, I might want to make her suffer. Hmmmmm. I know who you mean about in the office. It COULD be that person, but then again he didn't seem that shocked. But again, it was only his initial reaction. And hey, you STILL didn't answer me about Nick WALKING! LOL! My big drama and no one cares hee hee! Aside from the story, Opie and Anthony got in A LOT of trouble here. They got a couple to have sex in St. Patrick's and the couple got arrested and they got fired and then went to Satalite radio now. They had a major bumpersticker campaign here and they are still around. My Mom and I saw a girl WoWing a truck driver once LOL! As for the quote thing. Just type it yourself where you want it [quote*]blah blah blah[/quote*] take out the * |
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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 23:53:10 GMT -5
You need to take out the initial quotes when you use the quote function and just use your own, but you're getting the hang of it!  Yeah, Nick isn't totally out of the woods yet, but he is getting there. He is pushing too hard and might have a relapse. But he is well on the way and he WAS able to make love again finally! And now they want a Bricky baby too! Don't think Ridge will like that one bit. I get it about Frank. That makes sense. I'm trying to find someone who is age appropriate and attractive enough but weathered looking. It's hard to cast people as you know and someone will always prefer someone else, so it may be a while. If anyone has any ideas, I am open to suggestions. |
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Post by dotd on Aug 19, 2005 23:54:34 GMT -5
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Post by foreverbrookie on Aug 20, 2005 1:44:54 GMT -5
That's a gorgeous church! LOL I checked out my friends website and I think I had the wrong DJ's that he knows. I was thinking of Storm & Birdsey I think because they are on their site with some stuff.. I have to ask now, and tell them about the church!
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Post by barbara on Aug 20, 2005 6:21:55 GMT -5
Hi Dot! What a great chapter. I for one have absolutely no idea who is in Ridge's ofice. As for a good-looking, older blond man- how about Robert Redford? Not sure how old he is now, but he is certainly weatherbeaten!!!! Thanks ;D barbara |
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Post by dotd on Aug 20, 2005 7:24:51 GMT -5
Hi Dot! What a great chapter. I for one have absolutely no idea who is in Ridge's ofice. As for a good-looking, older blond man- how about Robert Redford? Not sure how old he is now, but he is certainly weatherbeaten!!!! Thanks ;D barbara Actually someone did mention him, but he's so famous and so known I wonder if anyone could look at him and NOT think Robert Redford instead of Frank Payne. Glad you liked the chapter and glad to have you guessing about the person in the office. |
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Post by cindy on Aug 20, 2005 15:20:33 GMT -5
Well Dot the beautiful story of Bricky Done Right continues at a wonderful pace. Brooke is so confident, so loving and soooooooo impervious to the pleas of Retch. I know, you say this Ridge is not as bad as the one I see on the tv, but some things are hard to get past. Even in print, I hate him. I feel no sympathy for him. Nick is so determined and so loving. That is just what we have seen on tv. His focus is Brooke, Hope and getting his health back. I'm not surprised that he is pushing himself to the limit. Very Nick-like. The pictures make a nice addition to the story. I love Brooke's ring. It sort of reminds me of mine. Just as further inspiration, a band baguette diamonds will look great with the engagement ring. LOL! Tracy and Sue are great characters too. Brooke has always needed friends. In your story she has them. Very nice intimate scenes Dot. Brooke and Nick are as hot in print as they are onscreen. But I do wish we could seem some heat onscreen-physical heat! The chapter was so good and fulfilling for a Brooke fan. I can say I was not irritated or disappointed in one thing about this latest installment of ITNOT. Btw, I love it that Macy is scheming and fooling Satanie and Retch. Ha!!!!!!!!!! More good things coming down the pike. Thanks Dot for the delicious chapter! |
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Post by dotd on Aug 20, 2005 16:09:13 GMT -5
Well Dot the beautiful story of Bricky Done Right continues at a wonderful pace. Brooke is so confident, so loving and soooooooo impervious to the pleas of Retch. I know, you say this Ridge is not as bad as the one I see on the tv, but some things are hard to get past. Even in print, I hate him. I feel no sympathy for him. Well I am just going for Bricky done interestingly and romantically. They will have obsticles and problems. It won't always be smooth, but as long as we know that the love is there we can cross our fingers and wait for them to solve their problems. Ridge is bad in this story. This is post Ridget Ridge. It's Paradise where Ridge is not a bad guy at all. You can hate him all you want in ITNOT LOL! He loves Brooke and Hope more than he ever knew he could love. He is very determined about his health too. He is pushing, maybe too hard. Right now he has made some good progress, but it may slow down and that will annoy him. I think it's Nick like too! I'm glad you liked them. I may use them again, maybe just for important things, like a wedding band LOL! I thought that Nick would want something different and I thought it would be beautiful but not like one of those headlight rings Ridge gives out like candy. I thought she needed some friends besides just Megan and Donna. And connecting them to Nick lets me add scenes with multiple characters. And isn't it nice to see Nick in his element with his happy lady! I wish Bell would give us some too, but since he won't I will do my best. I wanted these scenes to be more romantic than sexy. But next time I will give them a steamier scene. Thanks Cindy. I am so glad that I didn't disappoint you. I hope I left you wanting more and wondering about things too! |
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And I was confused for a second with Chuck and Corky, because Corky is a nickname for Chuck but I figured that one out. And what is WoW that Thomas wanted to play with Ridge? All I could think of (and it really had me laughing) was Whip em Out Wednesday.. 
Do I need to explain what that is? I think it's just a Boston thing.. There is a radio station that did it and truckers used to have the initials on the trucks.. it means show me your boobs! 
