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Post by dotd on Apr 19, 2006 14:00:51 GMT -5
This chapter has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by cindy on Apr 19, 2006 16:13:59 GMT -5
Wow! What a great chapter Dot. Brooke is really coming into her own. With the confidence Nick's love gives her, she is just dynamite. I still hate Retch. Even though he is not the same as the B&B Retch, he is still arrogant and reptilian. He slept with Taylor over and over and yet he expected to start things up w/Brooke like nothing had happened. Ewwwwwwww. And that does not even address the other little surprise waiting to be exposed. But darn aren't you the clever one using the old right ring, wrong woman thing. LOLOL So once again, Taylor has to take Brooke's leftovers. What an opportunist Retch is. Deacon is really someone I can like. He is like the Deacon that was in love w/Jackie and Brooke. And he is so hot w/Carla. She has no idea what has happened to her. Should I be seeing Pam's face when I see Carla's name? LOLOL You even made Piggett palatable in your story. I still don't care one bit about her, but I don't hate her. So you did a great job. I am liking a certain handsome, British assistant. He is not intimidated by the boss and he knows a good thing when he sees it. I think Nick is liking this guy too. More, more, more ...please. I loved it. I gobbled the thing whole in one sitting. Kudos for a great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by dotd on Apr 19, 2006 16:31:13 GMT -5
Wow! What a great chapter Dot. Brooke is really coming into her own. With the confidence Nick's love gives her, she is just dynamite. Thanks. I'm shocked that you read it already! It's barely been up! Yes, Brooke is learning that with someone who believes in her she can believe in herself. She is becoming strong and powerful now isn't she? Well this Ridge is not like the Ridge we're seeing. He's the old Waffleman Ridge, but he does love Brooke He knows how wrong he is to be sleeping with Taylor while still wanting Brooke but he had given up and then decided that he just couldn't do that. Now he seems to see the truth but can he really quit? What other little surprise to be exposed? I thought you meant the tape. I had fun with the Taylor getting Brooke's ring again scene LOL! I thought that it would be a nice bone for the Bridge fans who weren't happy that Brooke wasn't with Ridge. I am really trying to show Ridge as a man who has lost what he loves but who is basically a good person. I love Deacon, he's so sexy and so much fun to write and again my thanks to Pam for suggesting the Deacon and Carla pairing. I'm not sure if it can last but it will be fun as long as it does. As for the face, well it's not Pam's picture in the archives but I'm sure she wouldn't mind too much if it were. You might not like her long. She still hates Nick and she is going to be very angry at Brooke for a while too. She still wants Bridge and may become their biggest cheerleader. But I like her with CJ. Ethan is a good worker and while he respects his boss he won't be intimidated. He gives his advice and he listens. I think Nick likes him too, even if he doesn't always agree. Again, thank you for reading and posting so quickly! I'm so glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if it would all be to your liking, but we need conflict and drama don't we? Sorry that there wasn't really hot sexy scenes this time. I wanted it more about the love, trust and dramatics!
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Post by foreverbrookie on Apr 19, 2006 17:44:44 GMT -5
Hmm so Nick'ts real purpose with Omar is to keep an eye on Tatitana? I wonder if he'll mention it to Brooke tonight or if he'll be too distracted by Stephanie's disgusting depraved porn flick? Funny I didn't peg those two as being the connection, you fooled me Dot! Just as I thought though Bridget did not take the news about Deacon well, just wait until she finds out Nick's ex is sexing up Deacon! She'll really freak then. I like Bridget with CJ, it's almost ironic in a way that her and CJ are almost like Thorne and Macy (without the drunken pyschopathiness) in the way that Sally and CJ hate Brooke. I hope eventually CJ will soften up to Brooke, he could have said worse to Bridget about her so I guess that's a start. When Ridge gets a hold of that video the perv is probably going to try and get Brooke's head superimposed on Taylors body. That would actually kind of serv Stephanie right LOL. You had be suprised with the whole charter boat thing for Perry that was nice of Brooke to do. Are they going to stick around in the story at all? Maybe Perry's Nick's new private investigator? Ridge going back to Taylor as the default girl? LOL well that's a switch for him, huh? I kind of feel bad for Taylor, but like James told her she is setting herself up to get hurt again. LOL I think she should fight Carla for Deacon just to piss Ridge off. I'm just so glad that Brooke isn't falling for Ridge's shtick and I KNOW you won't make her do that! god love ya Dot! Great Chapter....... Yipppeeee! ITNOT is next!
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Post by dotd on Apr 19, 2006 18:16:03 GMT -5
Hmm so Nick'ts real purpose with Omar is to keep an eye on Tatitana? I wonder if he'll mention it to Brooke tonight or if he'll be too distracted by Stephanie's disgusting depraved porn flick? Funny I didn't peg those two as being the connection, you fooled me Dot! Omar is concerned about Tatiana and he is concerned about who knows what. He is used to everyone doing anything he commands and since he had a financial house in the country with people he trusted, he threw responsibility into their hands. Will Nick tell Brooke? Not sure about right away, she is a mess and they have more important things to talk about than business. But NIck has every intention of talking to her about Tatiana and getting answers from her too. The connection was Brooke and Nick about Tatiana. LOL! Bridget hates Nick and she is furious with her mother for any part she played in Deacon leaving. And even more furious that Brooke isn't punishing him by firing him. She will not be happy about Carla and I have big plans for that reveal LOL! CJ and Bridget can be fun and it's an added plus that he and his mother hate Brooke. Adds to the conflict. Though I don't want CJ to be as bad as he was on the show. He is being a lot more accepting of Brooke's role in Bridget's life and doesn't want to see them lose their relationship. LOL! I don't think that MY Ridge would do that. He loves Brooke and is obsessed with having her, but he is starting to accept that she doesn't want him. He does love Taylor, but she is his second choice. I feel bad for her too. She loves him and she really has no clue how hard he's been fighting for Brooke because he's been making Taylor feel like she is the only one. His world may just fall apart on him. Taylor and Deacon huh? I think that could be interesting but I have a bit invested in the Deacon/Carla thing so I'm going to stick with it for now. Glad you liked the boat stuff. I wondered if I'd scare you all when Brooke called Ridge and wanted to meet him. But I couldn't keep you worried too long. Perry was a fun guy to write for and he knows a lot about all of my main players so having him back in the story will be good. Now he will have a business here and they won't have to go to the islands if they want to talk to him. Brooke was generous but she feels he deserves it. Brooke isn't falling for Ridge's lines, but she does love him and will always care about him. Nick needs to be strong and understand that Brooke may love Ridge but she is in love and devoted to him. Yes, ITNOT is next. Now were was I in that? Any questions you still need answered? Any about the upcoming ITNOT? Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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Post by SL Tan on Apr 19, 2006 23:46:25 GMT -5
Another stunning chapter Dot. NIck and Brooke are so secure in their love for each other until Stepahnie pull her sick stunt and sent Nick spinning. Glad that Brooke told Stephanie off and NIck realised her reasons for the tears.
Deacan and Carla do make a wild couple and I like them together. Can't say that I like Bridget much. Maybe CJ will be able to bring love and stability in her life.
Stephanie is one sick lady, making a porno tape from Tride's lovemaking. That is so sick and I hope Brooke expose her big time. She deserves every contempt she's going to get. I hope Taylor never forgives her but I'm sure Ridge will in time to come. She's the worst mother possible to go this low just to make sure Brooke stays away.
Taylor is happy in her own world and I feel sad for her. Maybe she can overlook the Brooke factor in her marriage and be really happy. But I doubt that.
You are such an amazing writer and I hope you can come back for more soon, any story will do. Thanks Dot. I was so happy to see a new chapter to this story.
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Post by yash on Apr 20, 2006 5:33:01 GMT -5
Excellent chapter, Dot. Stephanie, Stephanie, Stephanie. Watching your son make love to his ex. NASTY!!! Is Brooke really going to show the tape to Ridge? Or just use it as blackmail with Stephanie?
Only the Forresters could get upset with the fact that Deacon still works for the company even though Bridget doesn't work there and probably wouldn't be around there much because she has school and a life, yet convinently forget how Brooke had to work every day with her exes.
Thorne supporting Ridge's relationship with Brooke. Interesting twist. I'm glad he told Ridge that he was leading both Brooke and Taylor on.
I'm so proud of Brooke for sticking firm and not giving in to Ridge. Not giving him any false hope or a last kiss or anything like that.
I feel bad for Ridge taking Taylor as runner up. He deserves better, but I know how easy it go with the tried and true then striking out and trying something new and different, even if that would bring you greater happiness.
I know Bridget is hurt, but she is working my last nerve. Can CJ slap some sense into her? Or at least get her to stop whining?
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Post by dotd on Apr 20, 2006 7:38:25 GMT -5
Another stunning chapter Dot. NIck and Brooke are so secure in their love for each other until Stepahnie pull her sick stunt and sent Nick spinning. Glad that Brooke told Stephanie off and NIck realised her reasons for the tears. Stephanie never believed that Brooke was looking at anyone other than Ridge. It was natural for Nick to think Brooke was crying over the pain of seeing Ridge with Taylor in the video and while that was upsetting to her, she was more upset at how far Stephanie was willing to go just to hurt her. Nick may have been momentarilly insecure but he listened to her and had enough love and faith in her not to go running. And remember, his first reaction was anger at Stephanie for making Brooke cry so even if he thought he was going to lose her, he didn't want to see his love in pain. Carla has suffered a lot. She loved Nick and thought her life was all in control and then bit by bit it all fell apart. Deacon has been trying to make himself a better man, but he's still a wild child. He gave up his comfortable life for Brooke and for Bridget but then he met a woman who suddenly made him see that there might be something worth staying around for. I'm not sure how the others will react to them but I'm enjoying their journey. As for Bridget, she's angry and she has a right to be. But that anger should only be about Deacon. She has no right to tell Brooke not to be with Nick. CJ is not a Brooke fan but he does want to see Bridget have a good relationship with her mother. He could be good for her. Stephanie had the tape done just so she could spy on them but when she realized she could use it to keep Brooke away she couldn't resist. Now it looks like she is going to have to pay for that. I think you're right and that Ridge will eventually forgive Stephanie but I'm not sure about Taylor. We will have to see about that! I'm getting all my players in place. Taylor loves Ridge and wants to be happy, but a lot of other things are going to happen. Brooke really isn't a factor. She loves Ridge but not as a lover anymore. Taylor may be able to get past that, but there will be so many other things. Thank you so much! My next will be ITNOT. But I haven't started it yet. I will soon!
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Post by dotd on Apr 20, 2006 8:04:52 GMT -5
Excellent chapter, Dot. Stephanie, Stephanie, Stephanie. Watching your son make love to his ex. NASTY!!! Is Brooke really going to show the tape to Ridge? Or just use it as blackmail with Stephanie? Stephanie didn't exactly have watching sex in mind. She just wanted to be sure that Ridge went back to Taylor. It wasn't until she felt that Brooke was a huge threat that she decided to "use" the tape. Will Brooke actually show Ridge? I'm thinking she will be using the tape as a threat over Stephanie's head for a while. Notice too how no one responded when she called them on that. Not that I blame them for wanting Deacon gone, but they should at least try to listen to Brooke's reasoning. And yes, Bridget doesn't work there and doesn't spend much time there so it shouldn't bother her THAT much! When Brooke first left Thorne still wanted to win her back and when she returned he still had hopes but he saw that Ridge was so desperately in love with her and he saw that Brooke still had feelings he decided that it was fruitless for him to try and instead decided to support his brother. But Thorne isn't giving Ridge any free passes. He cares about both women and he's not about to let Ridge hurt either one of them. She was probably tempted. She still loves him, but she wants a life with Nick. She wants Ridge in her life though so she is walking a dangerous tightrope. Bad for Ridge? LOLOL! Okay, you're getting me back here. I'll be good and take it. But if anyone should be felt bad for it's Taylor. She thinks she has his heart and he's just doing his usual waffleman act. But storywise, I can't have him with anyone BUT Taylor. It just would change everything and I'm well plotted out. But don't feel too bad for him. I'm sure he'll be screwing models on the side. Bridget will get more annoying when she sees that Brooke has chosen Nick. Why should her mother be happy and not let her be? And why should her mother be with the man she hates? She may stop whining but I think she may find new traits to annoy you with LOL! Thanks for reading my short chapter and responding so quickly!
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Post by barbara on Apr 21, 2006 3:20:40 GMT -5
Hi Dot! You can be relied on to entertain and provoke!! I am finally getting over the one problem I had with this FanFic, and that is picturing Tom Hanks as Nick. Note, I do not want to! Especially the sex scenes!!!!!!!!(my eyes, my eyes) he is just not sexually attractive to me. But it has just about faded away. I like Carla more now, and I have always been a Deacon fan, so go for it , I say. Bridget is such a sooky lala head in this (to coin a household term), even before Deacon broke it off with her, who was she to push her mother to Ridge? She is now a grown woman, get over your 8-year old self. Steph is her usual psycho self, I do hope Brooke shows at least 1 of Tridge the video, the more Steph's psychoses are aired, the better. And pleas more naughty forbidden hanky panky with Ridge and Tatiana (steamroom? ?) the more he misbehaves, the deeper in sh-t he goes!!!!!! (although Ridge is not irredeemably bad in this) Thanks again Barbara
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Post by dotd on Apr 21, 2006 7:12:23 GMT -5
Hi Dot! You can be relied on to entertain and provoke!! I am finally getting over the one problem I had with this FanFic, and that is picturing Tom Hanks as Nick. Note, I do not want to! Especially the sex scenes!!!!!!!!(my eyes, my eyes) he is just not sexually attractive to me. But it has just about faded away. I like Carla more now, and I have always been a Deacon fan, so go for it , I say. Bridget is such a sooky lala head in this (to coin a household term), even before Deacon broke it off with her, who was she to push her mother to Ridge? She is now a grown woman, get over your 8-year old self. Steph is her usual psycho self, I do hope Brooke shows at least 1 of Tridge the video, the more Steph's psychoses are aired, the better. And pleas more naughty forbidden hanky panky with Ridge and Tatiana (steamroom? ?) the more he misbehaves, the deeper in sh-t he goes!!!!!! (although Ridge is not irredeemably bad in this) Thanks again Barbara LOL! I guess the whole island thing was Tom Hanksish, but the one who was more like Tom's character was Brooke, though I can't imagine you picturing HER as Tom LOL! Bridget is only going to get worse once she finds out that "that man" is responsible for the woman who is on Deacon's arm! But Deacon has himself a woman now and I think he is liking it very much. I'm not sure if Brooke will show anyone the video but Stephanie will surely live in fear of it. And don't worry, Ridge is going to get himself in deeper with Tati, even if it's not sexually. He's not a bad person in this story, just the original waffleman LOL! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Post by stellerj on Apr 22, 2006 20:21:55 GMT -5
WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!! Did I say WOW!!!!! That was good! I hoipe Stephanie gets what is coming to her!!! She is truly demented in your story. Well, she is demented in Bell's version too but.......
I like Carla and Deacon too.
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Post by dotd on Apr 22, 2006 21:53:54 GMT -5
WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!! Did I say WOW!!!!! That was good! I hoipe Stephanie gets what is coming to her!!! She is truly demented in your story. Well, she is demented in Bell's version too but....... I like Carla and Deacon too. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not sure how soon Stephanie will get what's coming. Brooke is mad right now but she might calm down and not want to hurt Ridge. But Steph IS demented. LOL! I'm glad you like Carla and Deacon. I do too.
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Post by theblackpearl on Apr 26, 2006 15:27:48 GMT -5
What? I had to think. Taylor's a fool. Well, it's not like she knows about the ring, but...well, Ridge has not changed and he doesn't look likely to at this rate. You really do a brilliant job walking the fine line of the Ridge character.... The goodbye, of a sort, between Ridge and Brooke at the marina was beautifully done. I felt for Ridge because it seemed he was actually having honest emotions in that moment and was able to look past his *want* and see reality. Such a bittersweet moment. And then Ridge pulls this mess with the ring he was going to give Brooke. Same ol' playboy. Taylor would do well to listen to James and remember that bloody letter. Something is defninitely afoot with Omar. You have me intrigued. I think there's more going on that I don't know about....Hmmmmmmmmm. Loved the business meeting. Loved how matter of fact Brooke was. It's this way and shut up about it. LOL. Of course, now that Stephanie is spewing that about Brooke sleeping with Deacon....if Carla were to happen to be at Forrester to see Brooke for some unknown reason....and happen to hear Stephanie behaving like a loon and talking about how Brooke is sleeping with Deacon and 'that island man' and how Brooke stole Deacon from her own daughter....Well...might make for an interesting day at FC. LOL. I loved the playfulness Deacon has with Carla. And while he brings out that 'wanton woman' that she finds so hard to face in the harsh light of day, I believe Deacon makes her very nervous in a lot of ways. I found her 'recovery' from her first night with him very amusing and I love that they both were wandering about 'looking' for the other. Bridget...*snicker*...Can't blame CJ for laughing. And Yay! for Perry! That was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Pam
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Post by dotd on Apr 26, 2006 16:49:08 GMT -5
What? I had to think. Taylor's a fool. Well, it's not like she knows about the ring, but...well, Ridge has not changed and he doesn't look likely to at this rate. You really do a brilliant job walking the fine line of the Ridge character.... The goodbye, of a sort, between Ridge and Brooke at the marina was beautifully done. I felt for Ridge because it seemed he was actually having honest emotions in that moment and was able to look past his *want* and see reality. Such a bittersweet moment. And then Ridge pulls this mess with the ring he was going to give Brooke. Same ol' playboy. Taylor would do well to listen to James and remember that bloody letter. Taylor doesn't know about the ring and he did promise to get her one, so all her fears seemed to be unwarrented. She was worried about what James said and then about Ridge's strange reaction to the Ocean Club, but when he produced the ring, well that just made her very happy. I like playing the line with Ridge. This Ridge is not evil, not a perv, nothing bad, just a man who won't take no for an answer and a waffleman. His goodbye with Brooke was sad. It was killing him and you know Ridge's medicine has always been getting into bed with a woman who will soothe his ego and he DOES love both Brooke and Taylor, he admitted that to Thorne. He was wrong to jump into it but I think he was afraid he'd lose Taylor too if he didn't. The letter WILL come back into play and it will effect everyone! Omar is up to something and he wants to control his daughter. He has reasons and I'm sure people are suspecting them. But there are a few scenerios that could play out. Brooke took charge didn't she? She knows that Deacon is a good man and that it was very hard to do what he did, and she is going to support him no matter what the others say. It's hard for her, but she is true to her word. Stephanie just won't give up. She has Brooke out of Ridge's life but that's not good enough for her is it? And yes, if Carla finds out who Deacon is and that HER Deacon is Brooke and Bridget's Deacon, well yes, there could be some major fireworks. And I bet she too would believe Brooke is sleeping with him. Deacon brings out the wild woman and the playfulness in Carla, but Carla brings out something in him too. His feelings are going through the roof with this. He loves the hot sex, but he wants this woman in more ways than in bed. I think she could calm that savage beast in him if they would both let it happen. They have both connected more deeply than either wants to admit. Bridget is a PITA, but Brooke loves her and I think CJ does too LOL! I love the idea of having my Perry back. He was so much fun to write and he sees inside all these people. I wonder what Taylor will think of him. He may not have the degree but I think he could go step for step with her! Thanks for reading but hey? Not one mention of my golden couple?? They weren't even enough to register a hot or a cute from you? Poor Nick, Pam just won't warm to him. Will I have to set Tracy on you??
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