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Post by missyb on Jun 7, 2008 13:47:31 GMT -5
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Post by Logan on Jun 7, 2008 14:40:52 GMT -5
Well that was certainly an interesting ending!
And I've said it before and I'll say it again (mostly because it's worth repeating) STEPHANIE IS A BITCH!!!!!
And the bratty Felicia and Thorne are just that---BRATTY. Grow the hell up. Like THEY didn't lead a priviledge life being Eric Forrester's children.
I don't like the way the talked about Rick and Bridget.
You better not be pulling that same thing they pulled on Days with Mimi and Rex (who I loved by the way). Mimi was pregnant but then got all those classic "mixed signals" from Rex that he didn't want children right now blah blah blah I hated that.
Bridget should say "Yeah well guess what---we're having a baby!"
Which is what I thought Mimi should have done.
Their loves scenes were hot but of course Beacon has always been hot ;D
Too bad Brat screwed THAT up. (like everything else). I miss Beacon.
I would love to see Ridge head to Colorado and I would love to see him confront Ian.
Great job Missy!!!
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Post by missyb on Jun 7, 2008 15:41:19 GMT -5
Well that was certainly an interesting ending! And I've said it before and I'll say it again (mostly because it's worth repeating) STEPHANIE IS A BITCH!!!!! And the bratty Felicia and Thorne are just that---BRATTY. Grow the hell up. Like THEY didn't lead a priviledge life being Eric Forrester's children. I don't like the way the talked about Rick and Bridget. You better not be pulling that same thing they pulled on Days with Mimi and Rex (who I loved by the way). Mimi was pregnant but then got all those classic "mixed signals" from Rex that he didn't want children right now blah blah blah I hated that. Bridget should say "Yeah well guess what---we're having a baby!" Which is what I thought Mimi should have done. Their loves scenes were hot but of course Beacon has always been hot ;D Too bad Brat screwed THAT up. (like everything else). I miss Beacon. I would love to see Ridge head to Colorado and I would love to see him confront Ian. Great job Missy!!! Well Brooke's response to Bridget is certainly telling. There are going to be certain issues dealing with her memory. The questionis, will it last or is this temporary? You'll have to see, but this could certainly complicate matters for many reasons. Stephanie hasn't changed. She wants what she wants. She was so close to having what she wanted and now this....her son Ridge isn't playing like he was suppossed to. Ridge is torn. That's why Stephanie wanted the meeting to go down BEFORE Ridge found out. She can't control Ridge....so she told him about the baby to feed his anger with Brooke. Expect Stephanie to try to manipulate as much as she can. But there will be certain consequences to her action as Eric will begin to see Stephanie. Yes, he knows that she's controling and a bitch at times, but he will expect her to show concern about Brooke, not worrying about the company. I don't think that Thorne and Felicia are bratty, Ridge is the ones who said those horrible things against Rick and Bridget. However, Thorne, Felicia and Kristen do feel, for right or wrong, that Bridget and Rick's shares, not to mention Ridge's should be equal. Right now...it's hard to say which side of the voting they will be a part of. Ridge has planted a seed. Yet, they weren't happy at the prospect at outing Brooke. Nor do they seem thrilled with the idea of Ridge being in charge. Truthfully, Bridget is misunderstanding Deacon. No, at the moment, he doesn't want children. Bridget's young and in school. Deacon wants her to finish school but once he finds out about the baby I'm sure he'll be very happy. As for Bridget, you are right, she should had said something but she's young, she's pregnant and her mother sick. She's not really thinking clearly. Right now she's emotional and it's okay. I thought that you'd like the Breacon love scene. I wanted something mixture of hot and sweet. These scenes also shows that Bridget and Deacon's love for each other is real. |
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Post by jasmineca on Jun 7, 2008 20:28:54 GMT -5
All I can say is WOW - what a fantastic chapter! The ending blew me away - I hope Ian can deal with it all. Considering Brooke thinks she is still married to Ridge - I guess he can't knock the crap out of him just yet. . . And I knew Ridge was doing what he was doing out of heartbreak more than revenge. And please don't let Bridget do something horrible because she thinks Deacon will not want the baby. . . And hmmm - is Ian going to have to come to Sasha's rescue now that Remy wants her dead? How will this affect Brooke? I know I am rambling. . . can't wait for the next chapter! You have me hanging on the edge of my seat! Question - you may not answer it just yet - is Remy's Victoria the same Vicki that is Ace's ex-wife?
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Post by missyb on Jun 7, 2008 21:31:02 GMT -5
All I can say is WOW - what a fantastic chapter! The ending blew me away - I hope Ian can deal with it all. Considering Brooke thinks she is still married to Ridge - I guess he can't knock the crap out of him just yet. . . And I knew Ridge was doing what he was doing out of heartbreak more than revenge. And please don't let Bridget do something horrible because she thinks Deacon will not want the baby. . . And hmmm - is Ian going to have to come to Sasha's rescue now that Remy wants her dead? How will this affect Brooke? I know I am rambling. . . can't wait for the next chapter! You have me hanging on the edge of my seat! Question - you may not answer it just yet - is Remy's Victoria the same Vicki that is Ace's ex-wife? Thanks...I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. This is like a real cliff hanger because lives are going to be changed after this. Brooke, Ian and her family are going to be dealing with the affects of Brooke's seizure, which in turn will effect not only the company but other's motives. Ian loves Brooke and will fight tooth and nail for his wife, but you it's going to hurt him to find out that she believes she's married to Ridge. Talk about a nightmare for him. He won't be the only one to hate this. Brooke's family thought that she was finally free of Ridge, she was but now that she thinks they are still married, that dream is dead. Don't expect Ian or Ridge to ever get along. They BOTH love this woman although Ridge's "love" is very unhealthy. The situation COULD get very sticky. Ridge is very much in love with Brooke, however his love of her turned into something else. You can't forget how he plotted against her nor can you forget that he used a sex slave to melt out his punishments. Ridge although is torn because a huge part of him wants to be there for Brooke. He loves her. BUT...how is he really going to feel now that he knows that Brooke was a) with another man b) pregnant by that man? Addiitonally, how is Taylor going to take all of this. Bridget should tell Deacon the truth but she's too scared too. She loves Deacon and doesn't want anything to ruin her marriage. Still, she' overacting a bit. Deacon very well would have a different thought about children if he knew that his wife was pregnant. Sasha's in danger. Remington isn't about to let her have power over him. This man can be dangerous. because he had power and a great deal of money. Will Ian come to her rescue? It's hard to say. He's totally in love with Brooke and devoted to her and their marriage. She is his focus, not Sasha. Still Sasha doesn't deserve what Remy has planned.. You'll find out and it isn't pretty. As for Sasha, I don't feel it was right what Remy did to her however don't feel too sorry for her. She will do everything in her power to get Ian back.Even trying at his lowest point. She loves Ian and sees her freedom as a second chance for them. But I certainly can say that Ridge and Sasha are going to complicate Brooke and Ian's happiness. As for Brooke, I can't see her being too thrilled with Sasha invovled in her or Ian's life. But right now...Sasha's the least of her concern. Right now, she doesn't even know who Sasha or Ian are. As far as Brooke is concerned, she's married to Ridge. That is a disaster the making. To answer your questions...no Remy's Vicki and Ace's ex-wife aren't the same. I realized too late that I gave them the same name. But that does tend to happen. Wel will get a chance to meet Ace's ex later when she give her ex and Ian some advice. Thanks so much for your comments. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  |
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Post by Logan on Jun 8, 2008 15:32:37 GMT -5
Missy just one small question:
Stephanie told Ridge that Brooke had been pregnant. Didn't he think or
will he think to ask he exactly HOW she knew that bit of info?
And does anyone think it's strange (or maybe it's just me) that Stephers
can just stand there in judgement of whoever and refer to them as a whore
without someone challenging her on that point? And does anyone show any respect to another's spouse? Why would they allow someone to bad mouth someone's spouse like that?
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Post by missyb on Jun 8, 2008 16:34:12 GMT -5
Missy just one small question: Stephanie told Ridge that Brooke had been pregnant. Didn't he think or will he think to ask he exactly HOW she knew that bit of info? And does anyone think it's strange (or maybe it's just me) that Stephers can just stand there in judgement of whoever and refer to them as a whore without someone challenging her on that point? And does anyone show any respect to another's spouse? Why would they allow someone to bad mouth someone's spouse like that? Right now Ridge is in shock about the entire situation. He will be torn between wanting to go to Brooke and finding out that Brooke has "been" with another man. Believe me, he will begin to ask a lot of questions to his mother and he won't be the only one. Deep down, Ridge knows how devious his mother is because he was using some of those very same tactic. As far as Stephanie calling Brooke a whore, nothing seems to different about Stephanie's behavior. Stephanie is Stephanie...she's willing to do everything she needs to get the company back. Expect Eric to take Stephanie to task for her behavior. Stephanie's been focusing so much on the company and NOT on her marriage. Eric is getting very tired of her behavior. |
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Post by simmie on Jun 11, 2008 22:19:32 GMT -5
Hey missy! How many more chapters do you think you have left to go?
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Post by missyb on Jun 13, 2008 5:46:06 GMT -5
Hey missy! How many more chapters do you think you have left to go? I'm not really sure. I know where the story is going and where it will end. This story isn't as complicated as Against All Odds. I'm thinking I will probably have around 20 more chapters. Do you think that I need to pick up the spend for this story or that there are too many chapters? I'd really like people's opinions. Sometimes I think that I should really focus on one story. |
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Post by yash on Jun 13, 2008 9:30:36 GMT -5
Missy, Missy, Missy,
Girl, I almost had a heart attack during the board meeting. Reading ahead, wondering, when Rick and Connor were going to walk through that door. Taylor made some good points, but someone needs to remind everyone that the reason Brooke owns 51% is because of shady dealings. This is not going to end well for the Forresters if they try to boot Brooke out.
I did like how Ridge played up to everyone and showed them what their position in Forrester could be like, if there was no Brooke. I hope they also remember their brother wants all the toys on the playground and while he's offering to share now in the future that might change.
I love you!!! I love you!! I love you!!! I love Ian with Brooke, I do. I really do. But for her to wake up and think she's still married to Ridge. GREAT!!! At some point, Ridge will have to be brought to his wife and I can't wait to see him make that walk down the hall with Ian, Deacon, Rick, and Stephen all wanting to murder him. Oh, it's going to be great.
I don't think Ridge is a good enough actor to make Brooke think all is right in their "marriage." His jealousy of Ian and the knowledge that she was pregnant is going to eat at him, every moment he spends with her.
Sasha doesn't deserve what Remy has in store, I hope she knows it's coming. Will Ace be the main one to help her? I know Ian won't turn her away, but like you said Brooke is first and only priority.
My mind is just spinning, I'm sorry my comments are all over the place.
The news of Brooke's accident- - PERFECT TIMING. Doesn't Amber know what Ridge and Stephanie are plotting? If so, will she spill the beans and to who?
Can Eric's eyes get blown wide open already? I'm so over his dumbness. UGH!!! I do like your touches of how he's trying to reach out to Steph, but she's too obsessed with Ridge. I love the dance classes and wanting to go on a three month cruise. I want to go on the cruise, if he's looking for someone to go with him.
When does Deacon's mom and her friend hit town? I believe their loyalty will be with Brooke because of Deacon and Bridget. And just because I believe they will hate Steph on sight.
Poor Deacon. Once again, you highlighted what happens when you marry a baby. Brooke not recognizing Bridget isn't going to help matters at all. Who will she confide in? Or maybe her mother's "rejection" will help tell Deacon the truth.
EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!!!
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Post by simmie on Jun 13, 2008 10:09:03 GMT -5
You know missy, you ask a good question. I always wondered why it was, or better yet HOW you managed to write that many stories at one time! Seems like it would be alot of work! Honestly, I'd like it if you'd finish one story at a time. NO thats not true. I'd like it if you'd finish Love Story before anything else because it's the best story out there and the suspense is KILLING ME!!!
Don't get me wrong, i kinda like to be surprised with a random chapter from another story once in a while. BUt either way, do whatever works for you! I'll be around waiting for your next chapter on any story!
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Post by jasmineca on Jun 13, 2008 20:23:19 GMT -5
Hey missy! How many more chapters do you think you have left to go? I'm not really sure. I know where the story is going and where it will end. This story isn't as complicated as Against All Odds. I'm thinking I will probably have around 20 more chapters. Do you think that I need to pick up the spend for this story or that there are too many chapters? I'd really like people's opinions. Sometimes I think that I should really focus on one story. Whatever it is you are doing - keep doing it!!! I love all of your stories & no matter which one is next - I know it will be a fantastic read (Although I really can't wait for The Heat of the Night!!!)  |
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Post by missyb on Jun 14, 2008 18:11:37 GMT -5
Missy, Missy, Missy, Girl, I almost had a heart attack during the board meeting. Reading ahead, wondering, when Rick and Connor were going to walk through that door. Taylor made some good points, but someone needs to remind everyone that the reason Brooke owns 51% is because of shady dealings. This is not going to end well for the Forresters if they try to boot Brooke out. I did like how Ridge played up to everyone and showed them what their position in Forrester could be like, if there was no Brooke. I hope they also remember their brother wants all the toys on the playground and while he's offering to share now in the future that might change. I love you!!! I love you!! I love you!!! I love Ian with Brooke, I do. I really do. But for her to wake up and think she's still married to Ridge. GREAT!!! At some point, Ridge will have to be brought to his wife and I can't wait to see him make that walk down the hall with Ian, Deacon, Rick, and Stephen all wanting to murder him. Oh, it's going to be great. I don't think Ridge is a good enough actor to make Brooke think all is right in their "marriage." His jealousy of Ian and the knowledge that she was pregnant is going to eat at him, every moment he spends with her. Sasha doesn't deserve what Remy has in store, I hope she knows it's coming. Will Ace be the main one to help her? I know Ian won't turn her away, but like you said Brooke is first and only priority. My mind is just spinning, I'm sorry my comments are all over the place. The news of Brooke's accident- - PERFECT TIMING. Doesn't Amber know what Ridge and Stephanie are plotting? If so, will she spill the beans and to who? Can Eric's eyes get blown wide open already? I'm so over his dumbness. UGH!!! I do like your touches of how he's trying to reach out to Steph, but she's too obsessed with Ridge. I love the dance classes and wanting to go on a three month cruise. I want to go on the cruise, if he's looking for someone to go with him. When does Deacon's mom and her friend hit town? I believe their loyalty will be with Brooke because of Deacon and Bridget. And just because I believe they will hate Steph on sight. Poor Deacon. Once again, you highlighted what happens when you marry a baby. Brooke not recognizing Bridget isn't going to help matters at all. Who will she confide in? Or maybe her mother's "rejection" will help tell Deacon the truth. EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!!! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. It really pleases methat you enjoyed this chapter. Soo...you took a "sneak peak?" (LOL) I can understand because I've been known to take a peak myself. The board meeting was something else, wasn't it? With the addition with Taylor, the stock exchange and Ridge's "new vision" for Forrester. I can understand everyone's point of veiw, the truth is that Rick and Bridget will get stock and a board seat. It's also not fair that Thorne doesn't have equal stock as Ridge because he has worked for the company for many years. Ridge knew the cards he wanted to play and used Taylor to get everyone to "listen" that way that focus wasn't on him. The truth is, if it wasn't Brooke, there would be no one to stand up to Ridge. Ridge and Stephanie can make a powerful combination. Both Stephanie and Ridge want Ridge to be in charge of Forrester acting as CEO and as you've stated, it seems like Ridge is going to play fair. "for now" but how long will that last if he gets the power he's after? As far as booting Brooke out, Ridge states that what he wants...but that's anger, hatred and jealousy talking. You had to know with Brooke and Ian getting "married" and everyone accepting them together it was too easy! Brooke and Ian love each other deeply with all of their hearts and they had no "real" obstacles in the way UNTIL now. Brooke memory is a serious issue. She truly believes that she's married to Ridge and he's her husband. She loves HIM (we do remember how much Brooke used to love Ridge?). Oh...Boy....can you imgaine how crushed Ian's going to be? He has finally found the woman of his dreams yet she doesn't even know who he is. But now matter, he loves this woman and he isn't going to give up. He's going to fight for her all the way. Oh...you can expect fireworks when Ridge and Ian come face to face. These are two men who both love Brooke. One of Brooke's past, the other is her future. Ridge you bet he's going to hate Ian on spot. This is the man that Brooke moved on with and got pregnant by. Ridge will hate the thought of Brooke with anyone else. And Ian's going to hate the man who hurt Brooke for so many years. Ian's going to hate Ridge with a passion for so many reasons. I may not want Sasha with Ian, after all she was stupid enough to cheat on him when he loved her. BUT she doesn't deserve what Remy is doing to her. He disrepected her, cheated on her and tried to cheat her. Remy is a man who likes control. He wanted to control her in every way. To own her, have her beholden to him....so now that he wants to discard her he think she should simply go away. It enrages him that she knows about his illegal dealings and threatens to tell his parents or the press. He could easily give her the money and the property but to him she's a threat and he will do what's in his power to do just that. Sasha will want to turn to the only man who could protect her...we know who that is, don't we? As far as Ace goes he could be the one help Sasha out because he's so capable. Oh...speaking of Ace, wait until you meet the woman he's in love with. You are going to love her...she's no shrinking voilet. Eric's eyes are slowly opening to him wife (which you will see in the next chapter). He's tired of her machinations to put Ridge first. He's tired that she doesn't want to spend time with him enjoying the fruits of his labor. He wants to be loved and he's given Stephanie opportunity with the cruise and dance lessons but she doesn't get the point. She's too busy. Deacon's mom Rose and her best friend Jackie will be hitting town soon and you'll see him in an unexepectd place. Expect Rose to be a ball of fire. She's there to be there for her son and she will be in every way. As I stated before, she will want what's best for her son and for Bridget. She will adore Bridget. She also will stand up to Stephanie....who will hate her on stop! Deacon has no idea that he's upsetting his wife. Yes, Bridget is young and makes young mistakes (like not telling Deacon she's pregant). He has no idea that the things that he's said to her has made her question what he wants. More than anything Deacon wants Bridget safe, happy, protected and loved. As for Deacon, he will support his wife espeically now, in a way she's losing part of her mother during a time when she needs her most. Amber is aware of PART of the plan that Ridge and Stephanie are planning. Right now she's shocked and hurt about Stephanie's comments about her. Will her loyality for her "friend" end out or her loyality to her husband? It will be interesting to see. Thanks for your comments. I'm so glad that you liked the chapter. |
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Post by missyb on Jun 14, 2008 18:18:04 GMT -5
You know missy, you ask a good question. I always wondered why it was, or better yet HOW you managed to write that many stories at one time! Seems like it would be alot of work! Honestly, I'd like it if you'd finish one story at a time. NO thats not true. I'd like it if you'd finish Love Story before anything else because it's the best story out there and the suspense is KILLING ME!!! Don't get me wrong, i kinda like to be surprised with a random chapter from another story once in a while. BUt either way, do whatever works for you! I'll be around waiting for your next chapter on any story! You know it was a good question for me the think about. It is a lot of work sometimes keeping track of all the different stories and the story lines. LOL. Sometimes I have to keep myself on track by having an outline but I must admit that most of the time the story has a way of writing itself. I never planned the ski trip or the accident....it just happened. Orginally Brooke was suppossed to leave Ian to rush back for the board meeting when something happened....or someone names Sasha got in the way. SEE how things changed. I also wondered if my readers would get bored if I focused on one story. Some have favorites as others...however I am considering focusing on Love Story a little more since so many people seem to like the story. I may take a poll to decide what story to write for next. Thanks so much for your questions and your suggestions! |
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Post by missyb on Jun 14, 2008 18:26:43 GMT -5
I'm not really sure. I know where the story is going and where it will end. This story isn't as complicated as Against All Odds. I'm thinking I will probably have around 20 more chapters. Do you think that I need to pick up the spend for this story or that there are too many chapters? I'd really like people's opinions. Sometimes I think that I should really focus on one story. Whatever it is you are doing - keep doing it!!! I love all of your stories & no matter which one is next - I know it will be a fantastic read (Although I really can't wait for The Heat of the Night!!!) Thanks so much for the wonderful complement. I really do try my best. I really wish at times I could post more but you know, sometimes work get in the way, LOL! |
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