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Post by janice on Jul 5, 2009 0:39:30 GMT -5
"This chapter has been moved to the new board."
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Post by jillcat on Jul 5, 2009 1:02:31 GMT -5
What an action packed instalment. I'm still trying to absorb it all.
I'm so relieved that Nick was smart enough to have his 'blackmail' material ready for that bitch Bridget. She really is despicable. You just know she would have loved leaving a sword of Damocles hanging over Brooke and Nick's heads. Phew! I was really worried for a while there.
I'm dying to know how the Professor responds to Allie's poem.
Oh, and so want to learn more about Derek - he sounds like a real chip off the old block, LOL.
Excellent, excellent writing as usual, Janice!
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Post by giovanna on Jul 5, 2009 2:17:54 GMT -5
What an action packed instalment. I'm still trying to absorb it all. I'm so relieved that Nick was smart enough to have his 'blackmail' material ready for that bitch Bridget. She really is despicable. You just know she would have loved leaving a sword of Damocles hanging over Brooke and Nick's heads. Phew! I was really worried for a while there.I'm dying to know how the Professor responds to Allie's poem. Oh, and so want to learn more about Derek - he sounds like a real chip off the old block, LOL. Excellent, excellent writing as usual, Janice!
And thank you for including Connor in this story. I adore him and am thrilled that he is looking out for Brooke's interests. |
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Post by nickluver on Jul 5, 2009 12:15:35 GMT -5
Excellent installment!! Bridget is something else!! What a skank.
I have said this to Miss Jr. before but I now have to say the same thing to you, Bell could take writing lessons from you. Too bad he is not half as creative as you are.
Thanks for the wonderful story and I am so looking forward to more.
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Post by janice on Jul 5, 2009 12:25:46 GMT -5
What an action packed instalment. I'm still trying to absorb it all. I'm so relieved that Nick was smart enough to have his 'blackmail' material ready for that bitch Bridget. She really is despicable. You just know she would have loved leaving a sword of Damocles hanging over Brooke and Nick's heads. Phew! I was really worried for a while there. I'm dying to know how the Professor responds to Allie's poem. Oh, and so want to learn more about Derek - he sounds like a real chip off the old block, LOL. Excellent, excellent writing as usual, Janice! Thanks, Jill! I was going to have Bridget drag the situation with Dominique out, but I think this is more realistic. The Nick I knew and loved would handle it this way and Bridget would be left with no viable alternative. More about Derek in installments to come. |
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Post by janice on Jul 5, 2009 12:28:27 GMT -5
Whoa, awesome reading! And BooHoo is a spiteful bit of goods, using a baby to screw with people.
And thank you for including Connor in this story. I adore him and am thrilled that he is looking out for Brooke's interests. Giovanna, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I am trying to make Bridget someone I love to hate which is much more fun than just feeling irritated with her whiny self. Connor has always been one of my favorites, so he will be around although not prominent in the story. |
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Post by janice on Jul 5, 2009 12:30:33 GMT -5
Excellent installment!! Bridget is something else!! What a skank. I have said this to Miss Jr. before but I now have to say the same thing to you, Bell could take writing lessons from you. Too bad he is not half as creative as you are. Thanks for the wonderful story and I am so looking forward to more. Thanks so much for the reading and the very high praise. I adore Miss JR's stories and am honored that you mentioned me in the same sentence. I still can't believe Brad Bell took the wonderful story and characters his parents handed him and totally destroyed them. |
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