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Post by missyb on Nov 7, 2006 21:31:11 GMT -5
This chapter has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by yash on Nov 8, 2006 8:14:00 GMT -5
I'm speechless. What an intense chapter. Can I get my own personal Navy SEAL guy?
I love Ian's bravery and his willingness to sacrifice it all to save Kendall.
I'm glad Bridget is really starting to see the light about Ian. FINALLY!!! I hope she continues to grow and accept him for who he is.
What a good husband and son-in-law Deacon is. Trying to comfort and be there for the two women in his life. It's great.
I love this connection between Ian and Brooke. And now that Brooke is pregnant, I wonder if the connection will intensify?
The action, the suspense, the drama in this chapter was gripping and mind-blowing. I couldn't stop reading. I had to know what happened next.
i don't care if they ever go back to LA, but I know they must. Those battles should be interesting.
Thanks for a fantastic read,
Yash
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Post by lien on Nov 8, 2006 9:48:31 GMT -5
Oh my god! It was wonderful. But oh it was an intense chapter, like yash said! And I like Deacon very much, so loving and caring  And I was shocked, Brooke pregnant. I think it's a great and the bond between Brooke and Ian will only start growing. I can't wait for him to come back so she can tell him the wonderful news! I couldn't stop reading. I loved it  ;D Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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Post by Lexxie on Nov 8, 2006 11:15:53 GMT -5
Missy! Thank you so much for the new chapter! That was really great, very intense, and very well written. I love Ian and Brooke together, and I almost cried with her, eventhough I knew that Ian is OK (for now)
I'll write more later.
Thanks again!
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Post by am755 on Nov 8, 2006 12:24:32 GMT -5
Wow! I knew Brooke was pregnant as soon as she threw up. I hope Ian will be as thrilled as she is. I know he will make a great Dad. I'm already begging for more!!!! Soon!! Please??!!
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Post by missyb on Nov 8, 2006 17:01:28 GMT -5
I'm speechless. What an intense chapter. Can I get my own personal Navy SEAL guy? I love Ian's bravery and his willingness to sacrifice it all to save Kendall. I'm glad Bridget is really starting to see the light about Ian. FINALLY!!! I hope she continues to grow and accept him for who he is. What a good husband and son-in-law Deacon is. Trying to comfort and be there for the two women in his life. It's great. I love this connection between Ian and Brooke. And now that Brooke is pregnant, I wonder if the connection will intensify? The action, the suspense, the drama in this chapter was gripping and mind-blowing. I couldn't stop reading. I had to know what happened next. i don't care if they ever go back to LA, but I know they must. Those battles should be interesting. Thanks for a fantastic read, Yash Thanks so much for the complements Yash. You know this was a difficult chapter for me to write. I'm not sure if it's because I haven't written in such a long time for LS or the fact that it was so hardbreaking. However I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Navy S.E.A.L.S are special and Ian is the cream of the crop when it comes to them. He's smart, giving, sexy and not afraid. If it weren't for him Kendall would have died. He handed the situation and will make it back to Brooke. Bridget's changing. She's seeing and hearing all these great things about Ian. Bridget is also going to see her mother's reaction to Ian's "death" so she will truly understand just how much her mother loves Ian. This will change Bridget's opinion. How can it not, she man's a hero! Deacon is very supportive to Brooke during her time of need. He's dependable and strong. He also is very caring to not only Bridget but suprisingly Brooke as well. Brooke isn't going to forget that it's Deacon standing beside her. She will later return the favor. This is such a great Deacon. He can still be the "bad boy" but the type of bad boy to try to stand up for his family. Bridget, Little D and even Brooke are his family. He's going to protect him. This is the Deacon I've always wanted. Brooke and Ian have a deep connection. Notice that they both "knew" when the other was in trouble. The connection between them will only deepen as time goes on. I tried to make the action fast paced, but suspenceful as Ian tried to get away from the avalanche. I wasn't sure if it was boring or not interesting. Thanks for letting me know that you liked it. It was my first little "gaunt" into action. Maybe I can find some other scrapes for Ian to get into. After all he's a S.E.A. L. L.A's fast approaching. There will be battles for Forrester and so much more. Glad that you are enjoying the chapter. |
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Post by missyb on Nov 8, 2006 17:20:22 GMT -5
Oh my god! It was wonderful. But oh it was an intense chapter, like yash said! And I like Deacon very much, so loving and caring And I was shocked, Brooke pregnant. I think it's a great and the bond between Brooke and Ian will only start growing. I can't wait for him to come back so she can tell him the wonderful news! I couldn't stop reading. I loved it ;D Can't wait for the next chapter! Glad that you thought that it was a wonderful chapter. I guess I'm surprised that people are enjoying LS after so many months. I promise to have the next chapter up very soon. I'm going to put AAO on hold to write another chapter of LS. I just can't leave Brooke and Ian handing. Deacon is showing another side to his nature. It's more kind and caring. He's doing a good job of not only taking care of Bridget but also looking out for Brooke. Who would have ever thought that Deacon would comfort Brooke? But he did and it's a jesture that Brooke won't forget. As for the pregancy....iwho is pregnant, Brooke or Bridget? A baby would no doubt strengthen the bond between Brooke and Ian. Ian would be a wondeful father. Brooke and Ian do love each other. A child would be wonderful but are they ready for that? That next step? They both still have some secrets. They had a lot to work out. But then again, I'm getting ahead of myself. It could be Bridget. A baby would be something wonderful in her eyes but is she ready to be a mother? What about medical school? Also Bridget's still a little immature at time, is she ready for this step. Sorry...but you won't find out until the chapter after next who is pregnant. One thing I will tell you, the baby will bring joy to it's parents whoever they may be. |
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Post by missyb on Nov 8, 2006 17:24:19 GMT -5
Missy! Thank you so much for the new chapter! That was really great, very intense, and very well written. I love Ian and Brooke together, and I almost cried with her, eventhough I knew that Ian is OK (for now) I'll write more later. Thanks again! Thanks Lexxie. I know that it was short but I had to stop where I did. It was so hard for me to write these scenes because they were so sad. Brooke feels lost. She loves Ian. There is a strong connection, a bond that they have. It's almost unbreakable. It's strange because you do know that Ian's alive yet at the same time you see what Brooke is going through. |
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Post by missyb on Nov 8, 2006 17:26:34 GMT -5
Wow! I knew Brooke was pregnant as soon as she threw up. I hope Ian will be as thrilled as she is. I know he will make a great Dad. I'm already begging for more!!!! Soon!! Please??!! Brooke did get sick. But was it because she was upset or pregnant? You'll find out soon. I purposefully wrote the pregnancy scene in a way that it could be Brooke or Bridget. One of them is pregant but WHO? That question will be answered. The baby will be very much wanted by it's parents either it be Brooke and Ian or Bridget and Deacon. |
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Post by Logan on Nov 8, 2006 18:46:44 GMT -5
I say it's not Brooke who's pregnant.
It's Bridget.
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Post by yash on Nov 8, 2006 18:52:03 GMT -5
Glad that you thought that it was a wonderful chapter. I guess I'm surprised that people are enjoying LS after so many months. I promise to have the next chapter up very soon. I'm going to put AAO on hold to write another chapter of LS. I just can't leave Brooke and Ian handing.
Miissy, so you're going to leave me hanging about Brooke and Caspain? Crystal and Bridget? You can't do that to me....
Yash
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Post by lien on Nov 9, 2006 10:59:13 GMT -5
Glad that you thought that it was a wonderful chapter. I guess I'm surprised that people are enjoying LS after so many months. I promise to have the next chapter up very soon. I'm going to put AAO on hold to write another chapter of LS. I just can't leave Brooke and Ian handing. Miissy, so you're going to leave me hanging about Brooke and Caspain? Crystal and Bridget? You can't do that to me.... Yash Indeed they are both wondeful stories and either way, I can't wait to read them ;D And I'm hoping it will be Brooke who's pregnant, although maybe they need to get their secrets out in the open and really talk to each other, but they can do all that, even when Brooke is pregnant!  |
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Post by missyb on Nov 9, 2006 18:32:45 GMT -5
Glad that you thought that it was a wonderful chapter. I guess I'm surprised that people are enjoying LS after so many months. I promise to have the next chapter up very soon. I'm going to put AAO on hold to write another chapter of LS. I just can't leave Brooke and Ian handing. Miissy, so you're going to leave me hanging about Brooke and Caspain? Crystal and Bridget? You can't do that to me.... Yash I'm only putting them on hold for one more chapter of LS then it's back to AAO. Not to mention ITHOTN.....but I don't think too many people like that story. I might hang that one up. Not sure. But you will get your Brooke Ian fix AND your Brooke Caspian fix. LOL |
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Post by missyb on Nov 9, 2006 18:34:22 GMT -5
Glad that you thought that it was a wonderful chapter. I guess I'm surprised that people are enjoying LS after so many months. I promise to have the next chapter up very soon. I'm going to put AAO on hold to write another chapter of LS. I just can't leave Brooke and Ian handing. Miissy, so you're going to leave me hanging about Brooke and Caspain? Crystal and Bridget? You can't do that to me.... Yash Indeed they are both wondeful stories and either way, I can't wait to read them ;D And I'm hoping it will be Brooke who's pregnant, although maybe they need to get their secrets out in the open and really talk to each other, but they can do all that, even when Brooke is pregnant! Thanks...I hope to have LS up by Thanksgiving as a special treat. Then it's on to AAO. I can't leave it like I left it between Brooke and Caspian. Ahhh guys...you are making me feel so good. Thanks ;D |
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Post by Logan on Nov 9, 2006 19:40:52 GMT -5
Missy I generally do not like stories in which Brooke is paired with someone other than Ridge but when I first started reading this I was hooked. I do like Ian and Brooke.
I enjoy this story very much. I think it may be the only story in which I don't mind Brooke being with someone who is not Ridge.
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