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Post by Logan on Dec 10, 2006 12:38:33 GMT -5
This story has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by missyb on Dec 10, 2006 13:37:26 GMT -5
WOW Logan this was fantastic! I really needed something like this for the holiday. I loved that the family was all together for Christmas. Everything was perfectly described from the holiday dinner, to the close to the gift. It was wonderful.
I'll also admit that you have me going not knowing who "he" was. When it was revealed to be Ridge I was so happy for them. I so enjoyed seeing together with the beautiful family. Hope is so cute! When Brooke thought of the first time she and Ridge met, it brought back such memories. Then the notes in the box, leading to the limo to the wonderful home. THIS WAS PERFECT!
I even enjoyed the scene with Brooke and Amber talking about her granddaughter.
As for Bridget and Deacon, you did a wonderful job of taking us back and having them meet in a different fashion. I really liked it. Deacon was so unsure but in awe of Bridget as she felt that he wouldn't notice her. AWE...if only Bell had done them this way. I loved the first sweet kisss.....it was so romantic.
I enjoyed the background story about Deacon, his mom and his sister. This gave him such a sensitivity and a sweet side to him. In fact, I wouldn't mind if you continued this story at all. It had so much depth ti it, I want to know what happens next. The only thing missing was RJ....I know that he wasn't born but I did miss him. Also, where was Stephanie? Taylor? Just asking. LOL
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Post by Logan on Dec 10, 2006 14:42:24 GMT -5
I'm so glad you liked the story Missy.
R.J. was in the story, I didn't mention him much but he was there.
I actually was thinking of continuing this story. I haven't decided yet.
As for Taylor--who's Taylor? LOL!!!
I figured I would only mention the IMPORTANT people! LOL!!!
I think you meant Rick and not Amber.
Brooke was talking with Rick about her granddaughter
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Post by missyb on Dec 12, 2006 19:44:54 GMT -5
I'm so glad you liked the story Missy. R.J. was in the story, I didn't mention him much but he was there. I actually was thinking of continuing this story. I haven't decided yet. As for Taylor--who's Taylor? LOL!!! I figured I would only mention the IMPORTANT people! LOL!!! I think you meant Rick and not Amber. Brooke was talking with Rick about her granddaughter WOW...I totally screwed up. I thought that she was talking to Amber. Probably because when I was reading this my husband was screaming about the football game. PLEASE continue....I loved it. ;D |
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