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Post by dotd on Jul 5, 2005 20:04:16 GMT -5
This story has been moved to the new archive board.
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beth
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Post by beth on Aug 10, 2005 8:44:21 GMT -5
I sure hope you can get your creative juices flowing and give us another chapter. This is my very favorite story on this board right now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Since I can barely form 2 sentences together, I am very impressed with the writing. So much emotional detail that you just don't get while watching the show. Plus, I just love Rick Hearst who played Whip, so I get a great visual!
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Post by yash on Jan 6, 2006 19:05:23 GMT -5
Dot,
You astound me. I was glued to my seat. Where do I begin on what I loved? I loved the kids wanting to know the truth about what happened. I loved Tony's honesty without spilling too many details about the incident. Loved the reminder of Zende's past.
Kristen and Whip going head to head with Stephanie trying to make her see her foolish ways and statements were hillarious.
Nightengale and Ridge, very interesting.
Whip giving Mass a piece of his mind. EXCELLENT!!!
I could go on, but I'll stop with those. Now I'll go read chapter 22.
Thanks for the great read,
Yash
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Post by dotd on Jan 6, 2006 20:02:36 GMT -5
This isn't mine, it's Fan2C's story. She has problems posting so I post them for her.
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Post by fan2c on Jan 6, 2006 21:08:39 GMT -5
Yash, I am flattered to be mistaken for the Queen of Fanfic! Ifm not nearly as prolific as Dot, nor do I have her knack for hitting the mark with just what the readers are craving to see in their stories. So I doubt shefd be as flattered in return, LOL. Itfs good to hear you enjoyed my particular spin on the B&B scene though.
I love to mine all the peripheral characters like the children, Tony, and Kristen and of course Bellfs promising dead ends he wasted like Whip and Deacon. Those two worked so well off each other on the screen. They were well matched. There is really a lot there to use and flesh out. And it is so much fun to add in my own creations like Claire. And what could be better than writing the story exactly the way Ifd like to see it!
Ifve got to admit, I get a lot of pleasure writing the stuff where Stephanie takes a knock or two. Unfortunately shefs awfully thick skinned and so sure of the rightness of her views she just flips most of it off. Ifm in the process of setting up what I hope will be some interesting dynamics between Ridge and Mass. Claire is going to become involved with quite a few of the characters and really shake up things. I hope you enjoy what is to come!
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Post by dotd on Jan 6, 2006 23:01:16 GMT -5
Of course I was flattered to have someone think your wonderful story was mine. But I couldn't take credit now could I? LOL!
I'm not so sure I'm hitting any marks lately. I've been bad about writing lately, but I am trying to rectify that!
I WISH I had created Nightengale! I love her!
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Post by yash on Jan 8, 2006 5:12:16 GMT -5
Sorry guys for the confusion. When can Nightengale and Brooke meet? I think they could be the best friend the other has ever had. Is Nightengale going to get back with Tom, maybe in LA?
I LOVED that Nightengale took off the dress Ridge gave her, then before she put on his dinner jacket asked if it was really his. PRICELESS!
Yash
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Post by fan2c on Jan 8, 2006 9:24:51 GMT -5
No problem, Yash! Some things have to happen before Nightingale and Brooke meet, and there will be some complications at first. But then a connection out of left field is going to develop to really complicate but change things too. And no they are not related! Tom is going to show up, but his problems aren't going to conveniently disappear and new ones will add into the mix as well.
There was a lot going on in that scene with the dress. More to come on that dress in the next chapter. His friend's were well aware of Steph's controlling nature to the point they questioned just who was in control of the clothes on his back. Nothing saintly in their makeup, they teased him about it, but there was also an element of encouragement in it to try and goad him into standing up to her. They were on his side. Also we saw Steph pass the buck for what happened and get all bent out of shape for what she perceived as Eric and Ridge's failure to back her unconditionally, a betrayal in her eyes. She's so sure she's right and everyone else is wrong.
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