Entangled - Chapter 10

[norm811]

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[dotd]

Another great surprise. I wondered who it was until you said it was Eric and then I was sure Bridget would convince him not to tell Nick, but YAY! Nick actually was there too! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
I am so worried about poor Brooke. I know she will survive but I am worried that she won't walk. I know Nick will never leave her but will she push him away?
How selfish can Bridget be? Brooke is possibly dying, Taylor's life is forever changed, all the children are suffering and Ridge is dead and all she can think about is how she can't hang onto Nick. I am so glad that Deacon heard her talking to Dante. That's right Deacon, make her life hell LOL!
Your Nick and Hope scene was beautiful! Thanks for a reminder of what I loved so much!
I truly enjoyed this chapter! Thanks again!

[SL Tan]

I love it. The lying twit being exposed, not only with Eric but Nick as well. Goody! Deacon, make her life a living hell cause she sure deserved it. Her mom is fighting for her life and yet she couldn't be bothered to ask about Brooke. Selfish much.

Nick must be going through hell. Not only he lost his baby that never existed but he might loose the love of his life too. I am sure you won't kill our heroine, would you? Cause I wouldn't forgive you if you did. Taylor is another victim of Stephanie's evilness. Come back for another update soon. It's too good to wait that long. The show has nothing to offer for me so I only look forward to reading fanfictions. Thanks again.

[jrtllf01]

What a powerful chapter! I'm so glad that that lying little trick has been exposed and that it didn't take long either. What a selfish little bitch! All she can think about is her own nasty hide and hasn't so much as inquired about her mother. Strange how she quickly switched her allegiance to Dante to "take care" of her and her brat. I'm also horrified that Bridget expected her "explanation" to be so acceptable. I also look forward to Deacon making little Miss Forrester's life a living hell. I'm just sorry that Brooke won't be in any position to kick her and the Italian stallion out of her house!

That little Hope managed to bring me to tears again! The innocence of her questions are just heart-wrenching. How Nick managed to hold it together as he answered her questions is amazing. And, when he told her that Daddy was "sleeping," that was shattering! How do you even begin to prepare a little one for something like death? And, when was the last time Hope really interacted with Ridge? Poor thing!

Poor Nick! Thank goodness he is finally released from those golden chains and he can focus on the love of his life and the family they were hoping to have. I feel really bad for him that he fell for something that never really existed.

I'm really scared for Brooke! Please, please, don't let her stay out of commission too long! I really want her to feel the love of those who REALLY care about her and I know that Nick will stay by her side throughout this.

Poor Taylor! Eric was right about how the hag's evil infected everything she touched. Her children have to process all of this loss by themselves for right now. I was impressed by Eric's quiet strength as he struggles to pull his family together while mourning the loss of his son. I hope he doesn't let that DJ thing go. Will Taylor remember what Prince Omar revealed?

Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next installment!

[yash]

Excellent chapter! Go Deacon, destroy Bridget's little world. Poor Hope and RJ. I did love the scene between Hope and Nick. My heart breaks for everyone. I hope Brooke isn't paralyzed.

Yash

[norm811]

Thanks for the feed back, it keeps me motivated to write more.

The twists have not stopped just because Eric and Nick know Bridget's secret and she has not finished her manipulations just yet.

Deacon is about to come into the forefront and he and Nick will be allied in thier actions.

Brooke is not out of the woods yet nor is Taylor.

I plan to address Stephanies actions and the consequences of them not just for the Forresters but also for the Marrone's.

Eric is going to have a lot of responsibility and so is Thorne, Darla is going to feel a resentful of that and also of who he is feeling responsible for!

Chapter eleven is in progress I hope to have it to you soon. The way B&B is going at the moment I have at least another 1/2 hour a day to write!!

[stellerj]

These stories are marvelous! I can't believe the talent that is on this board! Why haven't you all applied to CBS with your fiction as your qualification? It is definitely much better than anything we have had on our screens for years!