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Post by norm811 on Oct 10, 2005 20:46:23 GMT -5
This story has been moved to the new archive board.
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Post by dotd on Oct 10, 2005 21:33:50 GMT -5
I am sooooooooooo hating Bridget. I wish Brooke would just fight for her own happiness. How can she think that Nick and Bridget could ever be happy when he loves her and not that twit.
I loved the brief but passionate encounter with Bricky. They are so perfect for each other. So in love.
I howled at Steph catching Jackie and Eric! Too funny!
I'm not sure what to make of Deacon. I want to root for him to really screw Bridget, but I don't want him to hurt Brooke, but he is a great character and I am enjoying his scenes!
Thanks for the fun read!
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Post by norm811 on Oct 10, 2005 22:29:58 GMT -5
Thanks Dot
Bridget is going to have a few highs and more low's in the next chapter.
Dante's true motives will become clearer.
Deacon may not be as black as first painted.
Taylor and Brooke will continue to be there for one another. But don't expect too much Ridge in this story, I find him difficult to write, he annoys the hell out of me.
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Post by dotd on Oct 10, 2005 22:35:54 GMT -5
LOL! He annoys me too! I don't mind him not being in the story at all! I like the ones you have in it now!  |
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Post by foreverbrookie on Oct 10, 2005 22:36:34 GMT -5
Another winner Norm! Bridget is such a skanky manipulative twit, but you've made her charecter so much more interesting than the one on B&B. I can't wait for Deacon to screw her over, she's so got it coming to her. I don't think that there is any way that she is going to be able to pull off her charade, in the end that b*tch is going to go down and hard and I can't wait!!  I was absolutely howling with the scene with Eric, Stephanie and Jackie. And Dante I LOVE how he's got Bridget's number. I don't know if Dante or Deacon is going to roll on Bridget first. I can't even decide who I want it to be. It was nice to get a little Bricky too even if it was a tortured scene, they still sizzle. How I wish that your scenes were playing out on the screen instead of the dreck that we currently have! I hope the boss stays away a little longer  |
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Post by foreverbrookie on Oct 10, 2005 22:39:43 GMT -5
And I'm all for less Ridge too! He got the smackdown he deserved, we really don't need any more of him |
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Post by SL Tan on Oct 11, 2005 0:50:09 GMT -5
I just couldn't say enough, I HATE Bridget. I kinda like Dante here. Deacon is as cunning as ever. The brief encounter of Bricky had me in tears. You pinned their pain right on bulls' eye. God, they love each other so much. I love your Nick.
Come back soon, norm. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by jrtllf01 on Oct 12, 2005 11:35:42 GMT -5
Excellent chapter, norm! I can't begin to tell you how much I despise Bridget. You have her cunningness, duplicity and skankery down pat! I had to laugh at her rather haughty attitude with Deacon. Don't you just love these born again virgins--AFTER the deed is done? She spreads her legs for Deacon, ruts with him like the dog she is, and all of sudden wants to get shy. Deacon is a trip, and I can't help but wonder if, with all that boinking they're doing, if something more than bodily fluids are being exchanged between those two. I sincerely hope that Nick NEVER climbs on top of that thing again!  The Bricky passion and heartbreak is so intense! I could feel their pain and longing. A part of me was afraid that someone would walk in on them. Hopefully Nick will be freed from the hell that he's living in right now. Loved Dante in this chapter! He definitely has Bridget pegged and is one cool customer. I'm looking forward to seeing him figure out what her game is and if he allows her to get away with it. Why he would want that demented pervert at all is beyond comprehension. Thank you for letting Stephanie get the comeuppance she so richly deserved! How like her to think that she can lie and manipulate her entire family and think she can slink her butt to Eric under the guise of "them" helping Bridget. I love how she puts in that "they" will help Bridget raise her brat. Like, she's been so successful in raising those whorish sons of hers, or the daughters who want nothing to do with her. I'm glad to see that Eric has a backbone and is doing nothing to hide his night of passion with Jackie. Poor Stephanie! It looks like that fecal roster of hers is growing more and more. And, of course, it's everyone's fault but her own! Thanks again for a great read! |
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Post by giovanna on Jul 30, 2009 16:37:22 GMT -5
:)Awesome, Norm! Now this is how this show should be written. I have always been disappointed that BooHoo got a free pass on her abortion lie. I am going to PM LaLogan, she should enjoy this!
BooHoo is something else! I am howling at her interactions with Deacon. Two pit vipers together, God help her child if her little plan comes to fruitation. I have a feeling that Dante will want sex as payment for his silence.
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I was absolutely howling with the scene with Eric, Stephanie and Jackie. And Dante I LOVE how he's got Bridget's number. I don't know if Dante or Deacon is going to roll on Bridget first. I can't even decide who I want it to be. It was nice to get a little Bricky too even if it was a tortured scene, they still sizzle. How I wish that your scenes were playing out on the screen instead of the dreck that we currently have! I hope the boss stays away a little longer 
