Chapter 4...I think.

[theblackpearl]

LOL. I can't keep track of the chapter numbers very well.

I liked this chapter.

Bridget sure is hateful child. That's right, child. Between the childish fantasy that wants to erase Deacon and have to going to Ridge a virgin once more and the virulent hatred coming from her mouth about Brooke stealing the husband she wants to erase and hatred for a baby. Heifer.

I have more sympathy for Ridge than I do her.

I like how playful Nick is. He keeps his sexuality mostly well in check. We just get hints of it. He's also protective and continuously has put Brooke's physical and emotional well being above anything else.

Yay for Eric! Dump the lying old harpy. He should have thrown at Stephanie that every sin she ever threw at Brooke she apparently wrote the book on.

Pam

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It's funny, I wrote that so long ago I almost forgot about it. I know now that there are some inconsistancies in the story. I put it aside for a while and then went back to it and I SORASED Hope and moved things up a bit. But yes, Bridget was and is a rather ungrateful daughter. Brooke did hurt her, but she refuses to realize that it was never her intent to do so. She also supposedly forgave Brooke, so the anger now seems out of place.
As for feeling sorry for Ridge, I don't think that will last too much longer LOL!
Nick is such a fun character to write for, but I went back and reread a bit to see where you were at and I see that as he lost some of his rougher edge on the show, he also did in my story. I think I need to give it back to him. But he does love Brooke and his playfulness and sexuallity haven't left so it's not all bad!
Well, you're just about to the part where I started up again and things really begin picking up. It will be a lot more about Nick and Brooke than about Bridget, but Bridge willl be returning too.
Enough about the current chapters, just let's get you caught up!
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm so happy to have you back on board and maybe once you're up to date you can go back and wake up your own Brooke! I even got Suzi saying she wants to read your story!