Chapter 18, Part I

[janice]

This chapter has been moved to the new board.

[am755]

Wow! Two twists that I didn't see coming. I'm glad that Lady Tudor came clean with Connor. I was afraid she would be revealed as a villian and I'm so glad that she isn't. I really like her and her family. And just maybe Gavin is really the father. That would be perfect!

Now, who is blackmailing Fleur? I have several idea's but I'm not sure. Is it someone we know or a new character? I think that this poor girl is in over her head.

Thanks for another great chapter. I'm looking forward to part II!

[janice]

am755 said:

Wow! Two twists that I didn't see coming. I'm glad that Lady Tudor came clean with Connor. I was afraid she would be revealed as a villian and I'm so glad that she isn't. I really like her and her family. And just maybe Gavin is really the father. That would be perfect!

Now, who is blackmailing Fleur? I have several idea's but I'm not sure. Is it someone we know or a new character? I think that this poor girl is in over her head.

Thanks for another great chapter. I'm looking forward to part II!

Thanks for your kind words. I really like Lady Tudor and her family, too. I wish I could post pictures of some of the characters like her and Anne, but maybe it's best left to people's imaginations.

Yes, Fleur's blackmailer is someone we know. In fact, I have left clues about the blackmailer, Fleur and the adoptive mother in the story. (I'm just never sure if my clues are so obvious I should delete them or so subtle that they're useless.)

I'm working on Part II right now - there are plenty of good times and bad times ahead for Brooke, the Forresters, Taylor, and the Tudors.

[foreverbrookie]

I think I know who The adoptive mother and the blackmailer are. If my guess is correct... I don't want to give it away... well let's just say, aren't they somehow related? Someone had a little lamb, right?

The question is.... Is Fleur who I thought she was? I'm not sure about her now. The wheels are going to have to continue to turn.
Great Chapter janice! Awesome back story on Lady Tudor!

[janice]

foreverbrookie said:

I think I know who The adoptive mother and the blackmailer are. If my guess is correct... I don't want to give it away... well let's just say, aren't they somehow related? Someone had a little lamb, right?

The question is.... Is Fleur who I thought she was? I'm not sure about her now. The wheels are going to have to continue to turn.
Great Chapter janice! Awesome back story on Lady Tudor!

Very clever question - you're half right.

I don't want to give anything away yet, but Fleur is not Kimberly. There was what I thought there was a huge clue in this chapter. Let me know if you want me to tell you where the clue was.

Thanks for your compliments on Lady Tudor. I've had that story in mind since I first introduced her and couldn't wait to post it.

[foreverbrookie]

janice said:

foreverbrookie said:

I think I know who The adoptive mother and the blackmailer are. If my guess is correct... I don't want to give it away... well let's just say, aren't they somehow related? Someone had a little lamb, right?

The question is.... Is Fleur who I thought she was? I'm not sure about her now. The wheels are going to have to continue to turn.
Great Chapter janice! Awesome back story on Lady Tudor!

Very clever question - you're half right.

I don't want to give anything away yet, but Fleur is not Kimberly. There was what I thought there was a huge clue in this chapter. Let me know if you want me to tell you where the clue was.

Thanks for your compliments on Lady Tudor. I've had that story in mind since I first introduced her and couldn't wait to post it.

Ahhh I did rush a little through the chapter last night . So I went back and re-investigated for the clue. I think I've got it.

I do believe it has to do with Fleurs attire. N'est pas?
Poor Fleur... she has been up Shit's Creek before hasn't she?

I forgot to mention how I love that Deacon has kept his edge and managed to turn into a good guy too. I love that he's pulling for Gavin to be Hope's father! Too bad, I thought in his line of work, he'd know plenty of guys willing to bust Ridge's kneecaps with a baseball bat for a couple of bucks. All's I asking for is just a little bit of Pesci action. <hee hee> Or how bout we go Godfather and put a horse's head in Massimo's bed? I'd just love to see Lady Tudor order something like that.

I can't wait for your next chapter!

[janice]

A few notes on the characters as I see them: In Chapter 1, I said that Agnes Bruckner was always Bridget for me. (I couldn't stand Jennifer Finnegan and didn't care for the very short-lived Emily Harrison or Ashley Jones.) Well, I loved her in the role and if Bell hadn't changed her I probably wouldn't either. However, he has and I found someone who epitomizes Brooke's and Eric's daughter to me. I've also chosen other actors for Thomas (Drew Tyler Bell is too young for his sisters), Phoebe, and Stephanie. And Jacob Young is my Rick.

I don't know how to show you pictures, so I can't do that. But I did want to note this. Thanks for reading.

[foreverbrookie]

janice said:

A few notes on the characters as I see them: In Chapter 1, I said that Agnes Bruckner was always Bridget for me. (I couldn't stand Jennifer Finnegan and didn't care for the very short-lived Emily Harrison or Ashley Jones.) Well, I loved her in the role and if Bell hadn't changed her I probably wouldn't either. However, he has and I found someone who epitomizes Brooke's and Eric's daughter to me. I've also chosen other actors for Thomas (Drew Tyler Bell is too young for his sisters), Phoebe, and Stephanie. And Jacob Young is my Rick.

I don't know how to show you pictures, so I can't do that. But I did want to note this. Thanks for reading.

Janice,
Do you have a photobucket account at all?
I have one and could help you if you want. The account is free and you can upload pictures to it to share on line. If you have certain pics that you would like to post for everyone to see, you could PM or email them to me and I could add them to my site so you could display them for you.
Let me know anything I can do to help!
FB

[janice]

foreverbrookie said:

janice said:

A few notes on the characters as I see them: In Chapter 1, I said that Agnes Bruckner was always Bridget for me. (I couldn't stand Jennifer Finnegan and didn't care for the very short-lived Emily Harrison or Ashley Jones.) Well, I loved her in the role and if Bell hadn't changed her I probably wouldn't either. However, he has and I found someone who epitomizes Brooke's and Eric's daughter to me. I've also chosen other actors for Thomas (Drew Tyler Bell is too young for his sisters), Phoebe, and Stephanie. And Jacob Young is my Rick.

I don't know how to show you pictures, so I can't do that. But I did want to note this. Thanks for reading.

Janice,
Do you have a photobucket account at all?
I have one and could help you if you want. The account is free and you can upload pictures to it to share on line. If you have certain pics that you would like to post for everyone to see, you could PM or email them to me and I could add them to my site so you could display them for you.
Let me know anything I can do to help!
FB

Thanks, FB! I might take you up on that. I'll review my pictures and see what I want to use. You're terrific!