Chapter 21

[theblackpearl]

Wow. I was so up and down with this chapter.

I really was feeling kind of bad for Ridge after the fiasco in Brooke's bedroom. He was trying so hard to do something to remind her of how good they had been. He just didn't think far enough. I am kind of glad, though, that Brooke got to tell him how all of those happy times ended in heartbreak for her. And that they were in a pattern that needed to be broken. It needed to be said.

I'm also glad to see Brooke putting the brakes on sexually with Nick too. Brooke's worth the wait and they will learn much more about each other and how they fit together if they leave the sex, which they already know is compatible, out of it for the time being. And besides, it never hurts a man to work for his reward, now does it? LOL.

I loved Brooke's interaction with Deacon. I loved how they respect and like each other. And you even managed to capture the hotness that they could be, even if I know it's not going anywhere. I love how shrewd and smart you let Deacon be.

Taylor is a damned fool.

Ridge...OY. He didn't waste any time.

And Tati certainly seems to have things going her way...for now. One has to wonder what Omar told her about her mother to incur this hatred.

I miss Carla still, but I have faith that you will bring her to L.A. soon.

Oh, and Nick's taste in movies is SO questionable! Boy needs an education!

Pam

[dotd]

Ridge did try so very hard. He had some very good romantic vibes going but Brooke has seen past the moves and just had to call him on them. She was flattered and she was tempted, but there were so many memories and not all good. And then there was Nick and her feelings for him. Ridge's timing was off, but he does have an ace that he doesn't even know about and when that comes out it might make more of an impression than any of his concocted schemes!

Brooke is just as tempted as Nick, but she wants this relationship to be real and full and she wants to know about Nick and have him know about her. She wants to laugh and to have fun and to just be normal. They both know the sex is good and it will happen, but right now there is so much more to learn about each other.

I loved the Deacon and Brooke scenes. They do like and respect each other and yes, the sparks are there even though this is not like it was on the show. Deacon is smart and sharp too. Nothing really gets by him and having him on her side can prove to be an asset for Brooke just like when Ridge tried to take over on the show.

Taylor is a fool, but she loves the fool and she wants her marriage back. She should listen to James.

Things are going a bit too smoothly for Tati, but that could change too. What did Omar tell her? Maybe not just Omar. I guess it's time for me to start bringing her story more into focus.

Carla will be back soon. And I will also try and bring Perry into it too. I miss him too.

Nick's taste is typical man. But he liked some good stuff too LOL! I just wanted a cute scene for them.

Thanks so much for catching up! Hope I don't make you wait too long for more!

[Lexxie]

Dot, BRAVA!!

I loved this chapter as well! I'm just so happy Brooke and Nick have found each other, and that they are really taking things slowly. Brooke is right that they almost have to start to get to know each other all over again, since all is different when other people are around.

I had to laugh about Nick at the office though, wanting another man to come work there as well. I'm glad he feels so easy around women too, but can totally understand he doesn't want to be the only male influence there

I was actually kind of happy about Brooke's reaction to Ridge's sushi in her bedroom. It is true that that particular moment was just wonderful, but that not long after that, Ridge left her (again) for Taylor! I'm glad that she could show Ridge that all of their good moments were actually followed by some very bad moments, and that he should understand that this time is different.

And I'm not surprised at all that Ridge actually is straight ahead ready to move back in with Taylor, and I really can't wait for Tatiana to work her 'magic' LOL. Taylor is going to start wishing for Brooke to be the one who's after her man, isn't she? And Deacon almost has her number, so this should prove to be more and more interesting.

However, Taylor is just as stupid as always, never asking Ridge the right questions, only being Oh so happy he wants to be with her again. She's going to be in for a huge, bad surprise, though, isn't she? It's kinda funny she thought Tatiana looked familiar (familiar indeed!!) but didn't think more of it. But that's typical Taylor as well.

I'm glad you have Deacon starting to think about Bridget, and his own life as well. And that he understands that he might even keep his job, if he decides to change something. I think that also shows what kind of woman Brooke is! (BBell hasn't ever understood what kind of woman Brooke is IMO)

And Stephanie only wants to see what hse wants to see...

Thanks a lot for this great chapter! It was a great read, and I can't wait for more. But I would love some Changes first, please

[dotd]

lexxie said:

Dot, BRAVA!!

I loved this chapter as well! I'm just so happy Brooke and Nick have found each other, and that they are really taking things slowly. Brooke is right that they almost have to start to get to know each other all over again, since all is different when other people are around.

I had to laugh about Nick at the office though, wanting another man to come work there as well. I'm glad he feels so easy around women too, but can totally understand he doesn't want to be the only male influence there

I was actually kind of happy about Brooke's reaction to Ridge's sushi in her bedroom. It is true that that particular moment was just wonderful, but that not long after that, Ridge left her (again) for Taylor! I'm glad that she could show Ridge that all of their good moments were actually followed by some very bad moments, and that he should understand that this time is different.

And I'm not surprised at all that Ridge actually is straight ahead ready to move back in with Taylor, and I really can't wait for Tatiana to work her 'magic' LOL. Taylor is going to start wishing for Brooke to be the one who's after her man, isn't she? And Deacon almost has her number, so this should prove to be more and more interesting.

However, Taylor is just as stupid as always, never asking Ridge the right questions, only being Oh so happy he wants to be with her again. She's going to be in for a huge, bad surprise, though, isn't she? It's kinda funny she thought Tatiana looked familiar (familiar indeed!!) but didn't think more of it. But that's typical Taylor as well.

I'm glad you have Deacon starting to think about Bridget, and his own life as well. And that he understands that he might even keep his job, if he decides to change something. I think that also shows what kind of woman Brooke is! (BBell hasn't ever understood what kind of woman Brooke is IMO)

And Stephanie only wants to see what hse wants to see...

Thanks a lot for this great chapter! It was a great read, and I can't wait for more. But I would love some Changes first, please

Is that your baby? She is so cute! Congrats to you!!!!

Anyway, thank you again for taking time out of your busy life to read and to leave me comments. It means so very much to me and I'm glad that I can entertain you!

Brooke and Nick are really starting over. Except they already do love each other. But they're having fun getting to know all the things that they didn't know about each other and maybe eve about themselves. The others around them will give them some troubles and some encouragement and provide some more of the real world for them.
Nick is happy to be back in an office. He wasn't comfortable in the role of outdoorsman and provider like on the island. This is his element and he will shine and he will make Brooke proud too. He is glad to have another man around too LOL!
Brooke was touched by what Ridge did for her. She loves him and she has good memories, but she has a lot of bad ones too, ones she can't and won't forget. She tried to open his eyes. She didn't do it to hurt him, but she wants him to know that she has changed, she has moved on and she needs to be the one to make her own choices in life.
Ridge, though went true to form and ran running to Taylor. But Tatiana is going to keep working her magic. I think you're right, Taylor WILL wish it were Brooke! And Deacon is close to getting it on Tatiana, but she still has her secrets. Taylor feels uncomfortable around her and doesn't know why, but that will come soon and then what? Hmmmmm.
Deacon does love Bridget, but he is not in love with her. Brooke had grown a new respect for him and he for her. He wants to do what's right, but a part of him is still not sure he wants to give up all his gains. Hopefully he will do the right thing and prove himself worthy of the trust Bridget and Brooke have in him.
Thanks again for reading and commenting and yes, Changes is next! I am trying my hardest to finish this weekend.

[Lexxie]

Yes, Dot, that's my baby time flies, I can't believe she's almost three months already I'm really looking forward to changes, but hope you won't be working too hard

[dotd]

lexxie said:

Yes, Dot, that's my baby time flies, I can't believe she's almost three months already I'm really looking forward to changes, but hope you won't be working too hard

She's a beauty!

And don't worry, I love writing so even if I work hard, it's a labor of love!